List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，比如“for him or for her”应为“for her”，并且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because my mother asks me to buy ingredients for cooking, so writing a list helps me remember everything.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“make this for my work”应为“make a list for my work”，且表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，表达清晰且连贯。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work to keep things organized, but sometimes I don't follow it strictly because I feel lazy.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但用词不够准确，如“making this”应为“making lists”，且句子结构稍显复杂。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it wastes time that could be spent on more important tasks.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“I prefer make this”应为“I prefer to make it”，且表达不够连贯。建议注意动词不定式的使用，并使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easy to edit them without erasing, which is very convenient for me.

× Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because my mother usually wants me to buy something for him or for her because she needs to cook dishes and and do some homework so I need to remember I need to write down the list.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I go shopping because my mother usually wants me to buy something for her because she needs to cook dishes and do some homework, so I need to remember and write down the list.

句中使用了错误的代词“him”，应改为“her”，因为前文提到的是“my mother”，指代应一致。此外，句子中有重复的“and”，应删除多余部分。建议注意代词的指代一致性和避免重复连接词。

× Yes, I also make this for my work too because I usually want to have all my work orderly, but it's not always work because sometimes I was lazy and can't follow it precisely.

✓ Yes, I also make this for my work too because I usually want to have all my work orderly, but it doesn't always work because sometimes I am lazy and can't follow it precisely.

句中“it's not always work”表达不正确，应为“it doesn't always work”，使用否定形式的现在时态。且“sometimes I was lazy”时态不一致，应改为“sometimes I am lazy”，保持现在时态。建议注意时态的一致性和正确使用否定形式。

× Maybe it's because making this itself is sometimes time wasting and you can use the time that you make it to do something more meaningful, such as going to work and so on.

✓ Maybe it's because making this itself is sometimes a waste of time and you can use the time you spend making it to do something more meaningful, such as going to work and so on.

“time wasting”用法不当，应改为“a waste of time”表示“浪费时间”。“the time that you make it”表达不自然，应改为“the time you spend making it”。建议注意固定搭配和表达的自然性。

× I prefer make this on my phone because I can edit it conveniently so you know you don't need to erase it or change it much harder. It's really convenient for me to.

✓ I prefer to make this on my phone because I can edit it conveniently, so you know you don't need to erase it or change it, which is much harder. It's really convenient for me too.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”，而非直接动词原形。句中“change it much harder”表达不正确，应改为“which is much harder”或类似表达。句末“for me to”不完整，应为“for me too”。建议注意动词搭配和句子完整性。