List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够流畅，且有重复词汇。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法正确。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop, especially in a shopping mall, because it helps me avoid forgetting anything.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，清楚说明原因。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, but I often don't finish it because I add extra tasks along the way.

제안: 回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并避免口头语。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do things freely without following a plan.

제안: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和重复。建议使用完整句子，并注意语法准确。

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because paper lists can be easily lost, while my phone is always with me.

× I think it make me. For less possibly to forgot to buy some.

✓ I think it makes me less likely to forget to buy some.

这里主语是单数it，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes，而不是make。句子中also存在拼写错误，forgot应为forget。整体句子结构需要调整，使表达更清晰。

× I think it make me. For less possibly to forgot to buy some.

✓ I think it makes me less likely to forget to buy some.

动词make应与主语it保持一致，使用第三人称单数形式makes。

× I hardly finish because I I may always do some add additional things.

✓ I hardly finish because I may always add some additional things.

这里的may用法正确，但句子中存在多余的do，应去掉。动词add应直接跟在may后面。

× I hardly finish because I I may always do some add additional things.

✓ I hardly finish because I may always add some additional things.

some additional things是复数形式，前面的do多余，应删除。

× these groups of people may not good, may may not like.

✓ these groups of people may not be good, may not like.

形容词good前需要有系动词be，表示状态。

× do something what? Whatever they want freely.

✓ do whatever they want freely.

句子结构不完整，what多余，应删除，使句子通顺。

× record something where wherever I am.

✓ record something wherever I am.

where和wherever重复，where应删除。