List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“plays everything out”应为“plans everything out”，“go with the floor”应为“go with the flow”，以及“do forgot”应为“do forget”。建议加强语法准确性和自然表达，同时避免重复和冗余。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop. I prefer to go with the flow and try to remember what I need. Sometimes I forget a few items, but it's not a big problem because I can buy them next time.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“when it come to work”应为“when it comes to work”，且句子衔接不够自然。建议使用更连贯的连接词，并注意时态和主谓一致。

예시: Believe it or not, I never make shopping lists. However, I am very organized when it comes to work. I make sure everything is planned and under control, which really helps me stay on track.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法和逻辑混乱，缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用适当的连接词使回答更连贯。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find them too long or stressful. Instead, they prefer to go with the flow and handle things spontaneously.

제안: 回答较为自然，但存在小的语法错误，如“make list”应为“make a list”，“apps help me”应为“apps that help me”。建议注意冠词使用和从句结构，使表达更准确。

예시: I am more of a tech person, so I prefer using my phone to make a list. I find it very convenient because there are plenty of apps that help me stay on track. Plus, I don't have to worry about losing a piece of paper.

× Sometimes I do forgot a thing or two, but it's not a big deal.

✓ Sometimes I do forget a thing or two, but it's not a big deal.

这里使用了助动词'do'，后面的动词应该用原形，不能用过去式'forgot'。正确用法是'do forget'。

× I just go with the floor and try to remember what I need.

✓ I just go with the flow and try to remember what I need.

短语应为'go with the flow'，表示顺其自然。'floor'是地板，使用错误。

× I actually really organized when it come to work.

✓ I am actually really organized when it comes to work.

此处缺少be动词'am'，且'come'应为第三人称单数形式'comes'，因为主语是it。

× I make sure everything planned and under control.

✓ I make sure everything is planned and under control.

缺少系动词'is'，使句子完整。

× I don't understand why some people like making this either where I guess it's too long or too stressful then maybe just go with the flow.

✓ I don't understand why some people like making lists either, where I guess it's too long or too stressful, then maybe they just go with the flow.

'this'应改为复数名词'lists'，且句子缺少主语'they'，使句子更完整。

× I am more of a tech person so I prefer using my phone to make list.

✓ I am more of a tech person so I prefer using my phone to make lists.

'list'应为复数形式'lists'，因为指的是一般的购物清单，不是特指一个。

× Plus I don't worry about losing piece of paper.

✓ Plus I don't worry about losing a piece of paper.

缺少冠词'a'，'piece of paper'前应加不定冠词。