List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I usually don't make a shopping list because I like to explore new products at the supermarket and often buy things spontaneously.

제안: 回答内容较好，但句子结构重复，建议使用更多连接词和多样化表达，使内容更连贯丰富。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it greatly improves my efficiency and often inspires new ideas while I organize my tasks.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议注意时态和单复数，使用更准确的词汇表达原因。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time and they find it hard to manage all the tasks, so they give up to avoid feeling overwhelmed.

제안: 回答中存在拼写错误和表达不准确，建议注意单词拼写和句子完整性，避免无关信息，保持回答简洁。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me organize my thoughts better than using my phone.

× Normally I don't because I think every time I go to the supermarket I don't want to plan in advance because every time I go there I will find new products in supermarket and most of the time I would like to buy them.

✓ Normally I don't because I think every time I go to the supermarket I don't want to plan in advance because every time I go there I find new products in the supermarket and most of the time I like to buy them.

这里的时态应保持一致，描述习惯性动作时用一般现在时。'will find'改为'find'，'would like'改为'like'，表示经常发生的事情。

× ...because every time I go there I will find new products in supermarket and most of the time I would like to buy them.

✓ ...because every time I go there I will find new products in the supermarket and most of the time I would like to buy them.

在英语中，提到特定的地方如'supermarket'时，通常需要加定冠词'the'，表示特指。

× Yes, I do make a list for my work and I think it works very well every time.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work and I think it works very well every time.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× When I make a list, my working efficiency will be improved hugely and that also inspired some new ideas for me when I am making a list.

✓ When I make a list, my working efficiency improves hugely and that also inspires some new ideas for me when I am making a list.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，'will be improved'改为'improves'，'inspired'改为'inspires'。

× ...and that also inspired some new ideas for me when I am making a list.

✓ ...and that also inspires some new ideas for me when I am making a list.

动词时态应与句子其他部分保持一致，且'inspired'应为现在时'inspires'。

× I think that's because sometimes making to do lists need some time and also some people think its difficult to manage all the tasks on the list so they just give up making it to avoid uncomplement.

✓ I think that's because sometimes making to-do lists needs some time and also some people think it's difficult to manage all the tasks on the list so they just give up making it to avoid uncompleteness.

'making to do lists'中'to do lists'应连字符为'to-do lists'，'need'应为单数形式'needs'，因为主语是单数动名词短语。'its'应为'it's'表示'it is'。'uncomplement'应为'uncompleteness'或其他正确词汇。

× sometimes making to do lists need some time

✓ sometimes making to-do lists needs some time

主语是动名词短语'making to-do lists'，视为单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式'needs'。

× I definitely prefer making lists on paper because I'm someone who realises heavily on writing things down by hand.

✓ I definitely prefer making lists on paper because I'm someone who relies heavily on writing things down by hand.

动词'realises'用错，应为'relies'，表示依赖。

× I found it easier and more convenient to organize my thoughts on paper rather than my phone, especially since I'm not very good at using phone maps.

✓ I found it easier and more convenient to organize my thoughts on paper rather than on my phone, especially since I'm not very good at using phone maps.

比较结构中应保持介词一致，'on paper'后面也应加'on'，即'on my phone'。

× Writing to do lists makes me really clearly.

✓ Writing to-do lists makes me really clear.

'clearly'是副词，修饰动词，句中应使用形容词'clear'来描述主语的感受。