List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有重复和不连贯的问题。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并避免冗余。

예시: I didn't use to make shopping lists, but after I moved out on my own, I realized I often forgot items. So, I started making lists to help me remember what to buy.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且句子不完整。建议使用完整句子，明确表达频率和原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

예시: I don't often make lists for work, but when I have three or four assignments at the same time, I find making a list very helpful to organize my tasks.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法和词汇使用错误严重，导致意思难以理解。建议先理清思路，使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并给出具体原因。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. They prefer to complete tasks spontaneously rather than following a strict plan.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“make hands”。建议使用正确表达，简洁明了地说明原因，并使用连接词。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and clear. For example, my iPhone has a checklist feature that helps me stay organized.

× Well when I was maybe 7 or 8 years ago I don't have this habit but when I'm moving out to the by myself and I found I usually forget what I need to buy when I go to the market.

✓ Well, when I was maybe 7 or 8 years old, I didn't have this habit, but when I moved out by myself, I found I usually forgot what I needed to buy when I went to the market.

这里涉及过去时态的使用错误。描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去式，如'didn't have'、'moved out'、'forgot'和'needed'。原句中使用了现在时态，导致时态混乱。建议将描述过去事件的动词改为过去式。

× So after that I develop this habit to making a list.

✓ So after that, I developed this habit of making a list.

动词'develop'后面接动名词时，结构应为'develop a habit of doing something'。原句中'to making'结构错误，应改为'of making'。同时，'develop'应使用过去式'developed'，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。

× Well, I would say it's very unfrequent and usually on my usually happen.

✓ Well, I would say it's very infrequent and usually happens to me.

单词'unfrequent'错误，应为'infrequent'。'usually on my usually happen'结构混乱，应改为'usually happens to me'。这里涉及形容词和副词的正确使用。

× It usually happens when my work is so heavy, like I have the three or four assignments at the same time, then I will making a list to.

✓ It usually happens when my work is so heavy, like I have three or four assignments at the same time, then I will make a list too.

'will making'结构错误，助动词'will'后应接动词原形'make'。另外，'the three or four assignments'中'the'不必要，应去掉。最后，'to'应为'too'表示'也'。

× Well, I think that people belongs to a rent that they do not like less because it will limit their activities or abilities and they prefer to finish thing to finish things or completing works. Completing works by with.

✓ Well, I think that some people belong to a group that does not like lists because it limits their activities or abilities, and they prefer to finish things without making lists.

原句中'people belongs to a rent'结构错误，'people'为复数，动词应为'belong'。'less'应为'lists'。句子结构混乱，代词使用不当，需调整句子使其通顺且语法正确。

× Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?

介词使用不一致，'on paper'和'your phone'应保持平行结构，均使用'on'。

× MMM it's a very good question 'cause usually I will make hands on my phone since it would be much convenient and clear.

✓ MMM, it's a very good question because usually I will make lists on my phone since it is much more convenient and clear.

'make hands'表达错误，应为'make lists'。'would be much convenient'应为'is much more convenient'，形容词比较级使用错误。

× Especially I use iPhone and there is a checklist at the top of my screen.

✓ Especially, I use an iPhone and there is a checklist at the top of my screen.

缺少冠词'an'，'iPhone'前应加不定冠词。