List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然且直接，但句子结构稍显重复，且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用连接词如“so”或“because”来更好地连接句子，并尝试丰富词汇表达。

예시: Yes, sometimes I make a shopping list because it helps me remember important items, so I don't forget anything when I go shopping.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“won't be procrastinated”应改为“won't procrastinate”。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me manage my time effectively and prevent me from procrastinating.

제안: 回答中表达不够自然，短语“making this isn't a piece of cake”不够准确，且句子结构较复杂。建议使用更简单自然的表达，并注意大小写和标点。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because it takes a lot of time and effort to organize everything clearly.

제안: 回答中“models”用词不当，应为“templates”或“formats”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并适当扩展理由，使表达更具体。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because apps offer many templates, so I can create lists quickly without organizing them myself.

× Yes, sometimes, because I need to know what I need to buy ahead of time so that I won't miss some important things when I'm shopping.

✓ Yes, sometimes, because I need to know what I need to buy ahead of time so that I don't miss some important things when I'm shopping.

这里使用了“won't”，表示将来时，但根据上下文，表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时的否定形式“don't”，更符合语境。

× Yes, I think it's a good habit and it does work because it gives me a sense of time and so that I won't be procrastinated and I can handle my things in time.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good habit and it does work because it gives me a sense of time so that I won't procrastinate and I can handle my things in time.

“won't be procrastinated”是被动语态，但“procrastinate”是主动行为动词，不能被动使用，应该用主动形式“won't procrastinate”。此外，“and so that”重复，应简化为“so that”。

× Maybe because making this isn't a piece of cake for many people, It requires much time and effort itself to make the list detailed and full of structure.

✓ Maybe because making this isn't a piece of cake for many people. It requires much time and effort itself to make the list detailed and well-structured.

原句中逗号连接两个独立句，应该用句号分开。此外，“full of structure”表达不自然，改为“well-structured”更准确。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone using apps because it has many models and I can use it directly without having to structure it myself.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone using apps because they have many templates and I can use them directly without having to structure it myself.

“apps”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“they”和“them”。“models”用词不当，应该用“templates”表示模板。