List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“No, not,”应为“No, I don't”。另外，表达不够清晰，'make a list in my brain'可以用更自然的表达方式。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并避免重复和模糊的表达。

예시: No, I don't usually make a physical list when I shop. Instead, I keep a mental note of the items I need, which helps me shop quickly and efficiently.

제안: 回答较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词和具体细节。建议在回答中加入连接词如“because”或“so”，并具体说明为什么不做列表，以及这种方法的效果如何。

예시: No, I don't make a list for my work because I prefer to keep all my tasks in my mind. This method works for me as it allows flexibility throughout the day.

제안: 语法错误明显，如“make a list cost a lot of times”应为“making a list takes a lot of time”。表达不够自然，建议使用更准确的语法结构，并丰富内容，说明原因更具体。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time to write them, and they prefer to start their work or study immediately without delay.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“I prefer make a list on paper”应为“I prefer to make a list on paper”。后半句表达不清楚，建议完整表达原因，并使用连贯的句子。

예시: I prefer to make a list on paper because if I use my phone, I tend to check it too often, which distracts me from studying.

× No, not, but I'll make a list in my brain.

✓ No, I don't, but I'll make a list in my brain.

这里缺少助动词'do'来构成否定句，正确的表达应该是'I don't'。

× I will approximately know what I want to board.

✓ I will approximately know what I want to buy.

动词'board'意思是登上（船、飞机等），与购物无关，应该用'buy'表示购买。

× It's not necessary to make a real list, I think.

✓ I think it's not necessary to make a real list.

句子顺序调整使表达更自然，'I think'作为主句的引导部分应放在句首。

× I just need to think about what I should do before I start a day.

✓ I just need to think about what I should do before I start the day.

'start a day'不符合习惯表达，应使用特指的'the day'。

× Because make a list cost a lot of times and maybe some people just want to start their work or study quickly.

✓ Because making a list costs a lot of time and maybe some people just want to start their work or study quickly.

'make a list'应改为动名词'making a list'作主语，'cost'需加第三人称单数's'，'a lot of times'应为'a lot of time'表示大量时间。

× I prefer make a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

动词'prefer'后应接不定式'to make'，而不是直接接动词原形。

× If I make a list on I will check my a lot of times and it will bother my study.

✓ If I make a list on my phone, I will check it a lot of times and it will bother my study.

句子缺少宾语'my phone'，'check my'缺少宾语，应为'check it'，使句子完整通顺。