List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时可以增加具体细节使回答更丰富。

예시: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I see it as a relaxing activity. I prefer to shop casually and buy things that catch my eye.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议使用更简洁的句子结构，并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I can complete my tasks before the deadline.

제안: 回答中有语法错误且表达不清晰，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，明确表达观点。

예시: I'm not sure, but maybe some people prefer to be spontaneous and relaxed, so they avoid making lists before going out.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达。

예시: It depends. When I was in school, I used paper lists, but now at university, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient.

× I'll make at least one I work.

✓ I'll make at least one when I work.

句子中缺少连接词“when”，导致句子结构不完整。应在“one”和“I work”之间加上“when”表示时间状语。

× The list is of profound significance when I work for it can improve my efficiency and I can finish my work before deadline if I make a list for it.

✓ The list is of profound significance when I work because it can improve my efficiency and I can finish my work before the deadline if I make a list for it.

句子中“for”用法不当，应使用“because”表示原因。同时，“before deadline”缺少冠词“the”，应为“before the deadline”。

× people are always want to go with the floor and they want to be relaxed once they leave,

✓ people always want to go with the flow and they want to be relaxed once they leave,

“are always want”结构错误，应去掉“are”，直接用“people always want”。“floor”应为“flow”，表示“顺其自然”。

× so they don't tend to make a list once they leave.

✓ so they don't tend to make a list when they leave.

“once”表示“一旦”，语义不符合此处表达，应改为“when”表示“当……时”。

× When I'm a primary school student or Senior High School student I can only use paper to make list to make a list.

✓ When I was a primary school student or senior high school student, I could only use paper to make a list.

时态应与过去时间点一致，使用过去时“was”和“could”。“make list to make a list”重复，应去掉重复部分。

× But when I'm in university I can be a be available to the phones or maybe I can make a list on my phone.

✓ But when I was in university, I could use phones or maybe I could make a list on my phone.

时态应为过去时，使用“was”和“could”。“be a be available to the phones”结构错误，应简化为“could use phones”。