List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения, что снижает его естественность и эффективность. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и избегать повторов, а также сделать ответ более связным и логичным.

예시: Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me focus and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: Ответ не ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки, а также повторения. Следует формулировать мысли более чётко и логично, избегать лишних слов и использовать правильные грамматические конструкции.

예시: No, I don't make lists for work because I find them unhelpful and prefer to keep tasks in my mind.

제안: Ответ не полностью соответствует вопросу и содержит грамматические ошибки. Рекомендуется дать более точный ответ, объясняя причины, почему люди не любят списки, и использовать связующие слова для логичности.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer to rely on memory instead.

제안: Ответ хороший, но можно улучшить связность и убрать неуместное выражение "helps Mr. Organize". Рекомендуется использовать более формальные и понятные выражения.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For instance, I can easily add or remove items anytime, and I don't have to worry about losing a paper list.

× Yes, I make a list when when I'm going to the shop because it's help me focusing and don't forget about another things.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I'm going to the shop because it helps me focus and not forget other things.

The verb 'help' should be followed by the base form 'focus' instead of the -ing form 'focusing'. Also, 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is', so the verb should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Additionally, 'another things' is incorrect; 'other things' is the correct plural form. The phrase 'don't forget' should be 'not forget' to correctly follow 'help me'.

× No, in my work I don't make a list because it's not help me and and to be honest it is.

✓ No, at my work I don't make a list because it doesn't help me and, to be honest, it doesn't.

The phrase 'it's not help me' is incorrect; it should be 'it doesn't help me' to use the correct negative form with the auxiliary 'does'. Also, 'and and' is a repetition error. The phrase 'to be honest it is' is unclear and should be 'to be honest, it doesn't' to maintain the negative meaning and clarity.

× Because some people sometimes forget about another important things and it is help people focusing and not forgetting anything.

✓ Because some people sometimes forget other important things and it helps people focus and not forget anything.

'Another important things' is incorrect; 'other important things' is correct for plural. 'It is help' should be 'it helps' to agree with the singular subject and correct verb form. 'Focusing' should be 'focus' to follow 'helps' correctly. Also, 'not forgetting' should be 'not forget' to parallel the verb 'focus'.