List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, usually I will make a list when I was shopping, but actually I won't write it down. I just remember it in my mind. But if I have to buy so many things, a lot of things, I will I will write it down on my phone on the note. And that's the that's, that's my hobby habit.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I will make a list for my work because it make me feel like step by step everything is well organized and is under control. It works very well for me and I really like that. Maybe I will use it for all of my work.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Because making lists need the ability to organise everything, need to consider the time, consider the workload and of of course they have the they need to have the persistence to work on under that list. So some people may don't like that.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
Actually, I prefer make a list on paper because I like writing. I like using my pen to write the things in my mind and when I finish it I can use a red pen to to to draw a slash, draw a dash to cancel that. It makes me feel accomplished.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 70.0제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复，且表达不够简洁自然。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并且尽量简洁明了地回答问题。
예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list in my mind. However, if I need to buy many items, I write them down on my phone's notes app to avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答中有语法错误，且表达稍显简单。建议注意主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时丰富细节使回答更具体。
예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me organize tasks step by step. This method keeps me in control and improves my efficiency, so I plan to continue using it for all my projects.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词，并避免重复，表达更自然流畅。
예시: Some people dislike making lists because it requires good organizational skills, time management, and persistence to follow through, which can be challenging for them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够简洁。建议注意动词形式，避免重复词汇，并用更自然的表达方式。
예시: Actually, I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing with a pen. Crossing out completed tasks with a red pen gives me a sense of accomplishment.
문법
× Yes, usually I will make a list when I was shopping, but actually I won't write it down.
✓ Yes, usually I make a list when I am shopping, but actually I don't write it down.
这里时态使用不当。'will make'和'was shopping'时态不一致，且表达习惯上购物时通常用一般现在时或现在进行时。建议用一般现在时或现在进行时表达习惯动作。
× Because making lists need the ability to organise everything, need to consider the time, consider the workload and of of course they have the they need to have the persistence to work on under that list.
✓ Because making lists needs the ability to organise everything, needs to consider the time, consider the workload and of course they need to have the persistence to work under that list.
主语'making lists'是单数形式，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'needs'。此外，句子中多处动词缺少第三人称单数形式。
× So some people may don't like that.
✓ So some people may not like that.
'may'是情态动词，后面应直接接动词原形，不能加'don't'。应改为'may not'。
× I will I will write it down on my phone on the note.
✓ I will write it down on my phone in the notes app.
'write down on my phone on the note'表达不准确，通常说'write down on my phone in the notes app'更自然。
× Actually, I prefer make a list on paper because I like writing.
✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on paper because I like writing.
'prefer'后面应接动词不定式'to make'，不能直接接动词原形。
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