List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping, especially for groceries. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and filler words. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

예시: Yes, I have recently started making a to-do list for my work. It helps me organise my tasks throughout the day and ensures I complete everything on time.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid guessing or using 'must' repeatedly. Instead, give clear reasons with proper sentence structure and vocabulary.

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. Others might feel that lists limit their flexibility.

제안: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains filler words. Try to express your preference clearly and explain reasons logically using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'baking list'.

예시: I usually prefer making lists on paper because it's easier for me. However, using my phone is more environmentally friendly and allows me to keep the list for a longer time.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go out to shop anything or usually for groceries, I make a list so that I can not, I don't, uh, left out with things that I don't remember.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go out to shop for anything or usually for groceries, I make a list so that I do not leave out things that I don't remember.

The phrase 'left out' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'leave out' because it is present tense to match the context. Also, 'shop anything' should be 'shop for anything' to use the correct preposition (Grammar problem type 11). The sentence also had a double negative 'can not, I don't' which is corrected to 'do not' for clarity.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go out to shop anything or usually for groceries, I make a list so that I can not, I don't, uh, left out with things that I don't remember.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I go out to shop for anything or usually for groceries, I make a list so that I do not leave out things that I don't remember.

The verb 'shop' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating the items being shopped for. Hence, 'shop anything' should be 'shop for anything'.

× Uh, it's easy to manage things and don't not buy unnecessary things.

✓ Uh, it's easy to manage things and not buy unnecessary things.

The phrase 'don't not buy' is a double negative and incorrect. It should be 'not buy' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yeah, recently I have started scheduling, uh, the work throughout, uh, throughout the day, uh, and also for work I make list what I have to do and what is left To Do List so that I can remember and do it on time.

✓ Yeah, recently I have started scheduling, uh, the work throughout, uh, throughout the day, uh, and also for work I make a list of what I have to do and what is left on the To-Do List so that I can remember and do it on time.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'make list what I have to do' is corrected to 'make a list of what I have to do' to be grammatically correct (Grammar problem type 22).

× Yeah, recently I have started scheduling, uh, the work throughout, uh, throughout the day, uh, and also for work I make list what I have to do and what is left To Do List so that I can remember and do it on time.

✓ Yeah, recently I have started scheduling, uh, the work throughout, uh, throughout the day, uh, and also for work I make a list of what I have to do and what is left on the To-Do List so that I can remember and do it on time.

The phrase 'what is left To Do List' is missing the preposition 'on' before 'To-Do List' to indicate location or reference.

× I think they must not be able to make lists because of they must be lazy or they must not like to do Chun journaling or they must be think it's just a waste of time.

✓ I think they must not be able to make lists because they must be lazy or they must not like to do journaling or they must think it's just a waste of time.

The phrase 'because of they' is incorrect; it should be 'because they'. Also, 'must be think' is incorrect; it should be 'must think'. These are errors in pronoun and verb usage (Grammar problem type 12).

× I think they must not be able to make lists because of they must be lazy or they must not like to do Chun journaling or they must be think it's just a waste of time.

✓ I think they must not be able to make lists because they must be lazy or they must not like to do journaling or they must think it's just a waste of time.

The word 'Chun' seems to be a mispronunciation or incorrect word; it should be 'journaling' alone. Also, 'must be think' is incorrect; 'must think' is correct. This relates to incorrect use of verbs and adverbs.

× Oh usually I prefer papers but like if you want to if you have an idea of recycling or going green, you should uh, go for a baking list out of your phone on your notes which is more beneficial and you can keep it for a longer time.

✓ Oh usually I prefer paper but if you want to, if you have an idea of recycling or going green, you should, uh, make a shopping list on your phone notes which is more beneficial and you can keep it for a longer time.

The phrase 'prefer papers' should be 'prefer paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here (Grammar problem type 1). 'Go for a baking list out of your phone on your notes' is incorrect; it should be 'make a shopping list on your phone notes'. The prepositions 'out of' and 'on' were misused (Grammar problem type 11). Also, 'baking list' is likely a mishearing or error; 'shopping list' fits context better.