List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免重复和不完整的句子，表达更自然流畅。可以增加连接词使内容更连贯，并具体说明使用清单的好处。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Since the mall is quite large, having a list ensures I don't forget anything important and saves me time.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，应注意句子结构和用词准确。建议用更清晰的语言表达清单带来的好处。

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work tasks. Using my phone to keep track helps me stay organized, and completing the list gives me a great sense of achievement.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并具体说明原因和举例。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they have good memories and prefer to remember things mentally. Others might use apps or different methods that suit them better.

제안: 回答较好，但部分表达不够自然，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，使表达更流畅。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. Apps like Memo help me keep track of tasks for work or study, and completing them gives me a strong sense of motivation.

× I like to use.

✓ I like to use it.

句子缺少宾语，动词后应接宾语，补充"it"使句子完整。

× I think it worked because in most cases I really like to remember them in my mouth, in my phone, because I can give give me a sense of achievement and if I finish the list.

✓ I think it works because in most cases I really like to remember them in my mouth, in my phone, because it can give me a sense of achievement if I finish the list.

此处描述的是现在的习惯，应使用一般现在时"works"，且"give give me"重复，应改为"give me"。

× Some people maybe have good memories so they needed to do it.

✓ Some people may have good memories so they don't need to do it.

"maybe"应为情态动词"may"，"needed"时态错误，应为现在时"don't need"，且主谓一致。

× Some people like to use some apps to remember something to.

✓ Some people like to use some apps to remember something too.

句尾"to"用错，应为"too"表示“也”。

× I'd like to make this app, such as the Memo.

✓ I'd like to use this app, such as Memo.

"make"用错，应为"use"表示“使用”，且"the Memo"中冠词不必要，改为"Memo"。