List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct grammar and more natural expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily, and it helps me avoid missing important items.

제안: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Also, avoid awkward phrases like 'my brain starts working much better'.

예시: Yes, as a student, I keep a study schedule, which helps me stay organized and focused because I always know what task to tackle next.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember everything, but this often leads to mistakes. Therefore, making a list before shopping is more reliable.

제안: Your answer is confusing and difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use correct grammar, and directly answer the question.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily check tasks I haven't completed yet.

× Yes, I normally have a shopping list because I have a shorter memories and it's annoying if I forgot something that I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I normally have a shopping list because I have a short memory and it's annoying if I forget something that I need to buy.

The phrase 'a shorter memories' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The correct singular form is 'a short memory'. Also, 'forgot' should be in present tense 'forget' to match the conditional 'if' clause referring to present/future possibility.

× Yes, I normally have a shopping list because I have a shorter memories and it's annoying if I forgot something that I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I normally have a shopping list because I have a short memory and it's annoying if I forget something that I need to buy.

In conditional sentences referring to present or future, the verb after 'if' should be in the present tense, not past tense. Therefore, 'forgot' should be 'forget'.

× Yes, as I'm a student I have a study schedule and it helped a lot for me because I know what to do next and my brain starts working much better.

✓ Yes, as I'm a student I have a study schedule and it helps me a lot because I know what to do next and my brain starts working much better.

The verb 'helped' is past tense but the context is present. It should be 'helps' to indicate ongoing effect. Also, 'helped a lot for me' is awkward; 'helps me a lot' is more natural.

× Yes, as I'm a student I have a study schedule and it helped a lot for me because I know what to do next and my brain starts working much better.

✓ Yes, as I'm a student I have a study schedule and it helps me a lot because I know what to do next and my brain starts working much better.

The phrase 'helped a lot for me' uses an incorrect preposition. The correct phrase is 'helps me a lot' without 'for'.

× Because they think it's unnecessary. Because they can Stow in their brain, but inaccurately it's not. It's better to do a list before you do, before you purchase anything.

✓ Because they think it's unnecessary. Because they can store it in their brain, but inaccurately. It's better to make a list before you do anything, before you purchase anything.

'Stow in their brain' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'store'. Also, 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Because they think it's unnecessary. Because they can Stow in their brain, but inaccurately it's not. It's better to do a list before you do, before you purchase anything.

✓ Because they think it's unnecessary. Because they can store it in their brain, but inaccurately. It's better to make a list before you do anything, before you purchase anything.

The pronoun 'it' is missing after 'store' to indicate what is being stored. Also, 'Stow' is a misspelling of 'store'.

× Because they think it's unnecessary. Because they can Stow in their brain, but inaccurately it's not. It's better to do a list before you do, before you purchase anything.

✓ Because they think it's unnecessary. Because they can store it in their brain, but inaccurately. It's better to make a list before you do anything, before you purchase anything.

The phrase 'before you do' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'anything' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'do a list' is incorrect; 'make a list' is the correct collocation.

× When I was in boarding school there we all have to use phone so I have to do in payable schedule when I was a when I was childhood but now I have a lot in my nose and I I usually check back when something I I need to do but I didn't do.

✓ When I was in boarding school, we all had to use phones, so I had to keep a schedule then when I was a child, but now I have a lot on my phone and I usually check back when there is something I need to do but haven't done.

The sentence contains multiple tense errors: 'have to' should be past tense 'had to' to match 'was'. 'When I was childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'. 'Have a lot in my nose' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'have a lot on my phone'. Also, 'didn't do' should be 'haven't done' to indicate an action not yet completed.