List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has good content but contains some language errors and unclear phrases like 'make delicious' and 'sections of the store of efficiency'. To improve, use clear and correct expressions, and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything important' and explain categorizing items clearly.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything important. It helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying. Moreover, I usually organize the list by store sections to shop more efficiently, and I use a shopping app to keep track of my list.

제안: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good vocabulary. However, there are minor grammatical errors like 'that sent me reminders' which should be 'that sends me reminders'. Also, try to use linking words like 'therefore' or 'as a result' to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks. I usually use a digital app that sends me reminders; therefore, I don't forget anything important. As a result, my productivity increases significantly, and I feel a great sense of accomplishment whenever I check off my completed tasks.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing like 'relay on their memory' and 'making listed'. To improve, use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, and add linking words such as 'because' and 'also' for better flow.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too time-consuming and prefer to rely on their memory to keep track of tasks. They feel confident that they can remember everything without writing it down, which allows them to focus more directly on their work. Also, some individuals believe that making lists disrupts their natural workflow and reduces their overall productivity.

제안: Your answer has several errors and unclear phrases such as 'making dishes on paper' and 'Having a paperless is more conventional'. To improve, use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly.

예시: Well, I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down, which helps me remember tasks better. Also, I find it easier to quickly glance at my paper list without unlocking my phone, especially when I am busy, for example, when I'm shopping. Using paper lists is more conventional and less distracting for me.

× Yes, I always make delicious when I shop to ensure I don't forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop to ensure I don't forget anything important.

The word 'delicious' is an adjective and does not fit the context. The correct noun here is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects sentence meaning, it is corrected to 'make a list'.

× I usually categorize items by sections of the store of efficiency and I use the shopping app to keep track of my list.

✓ I usually categorize items by sections of the store for efficiency and I use the shopping app to keep track of my list.

The phrase 'of efficiency' is incorrect here. The correct preposition is 'for' to indicate purpose. So, 'sections of the store for efficiency' is correct.

× Yes, I definitely will make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks.

Using 'will' here is unnecessary because the sentence talks about a habitual action. The simple present tense 'make' is appropriate for habits or routines.

× I usually use a digital app that sent me reminders, which ensures I don't forget anything important.

✓ I usually use a digital app that sends me reminders, which ensures I don't forget anything important.

The verb 'sent' is past tense, but the relative clause describes a habitual action, so the present tense 'sends' is correct.

× Some people don't like making list because they find it too time consuming and prefer to relay on their memory to keep track of tasks.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it too time consuming and prefer to rely on their memory to keep track of tasks.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists. Also, 'relay' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'rely'.

× Some people don't like making list because they find it too time consuming and prefer to relay on their memory to keep track of tasks.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they find it too time consuming and prefer to rely on their memory to keep track of tasks.

The preposition 'on' is correct after 'rely'. The original sentence had 'relay on' which is incorrect; it should be 'rely on'.

× Moreover, some individual believe that making listed disrupts their natural workflow and reduces their overall productivity.

✓ Moreover, some individuals believe that making lists disrupts their natural workflow and reduces their overall productivity.

The noun 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with 'some'. Also, 'listed' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'.

× Well, I prefer making dishes on paper because enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down which helps me remember tasks better.

✓ Well, I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing things down which helps me remember tasks better.

'Dishes' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'lists'. Also, the subject 'I' is missing before 'enjoy'.

× Also, I find it easier to quickly glance and my paper list without unlocking my phone, especially when I am busy, for example when I'm shopping.

✓ Also, I find it easier to quickly glance at my paper list without unlocking my phone, especially when I am busy, for example when I'm shopping.

The verb 'glance' requires the preposition 'at' to indicate what is being glanced at. The original sentence missed 'at'.

× Having a paperless is more conventional and less distracting.

✓ Having a paper list is more conventional and less distracting.

'Paperless' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun here. The intended meaning is 'paper list'.