List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the market because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

제안: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Focus on giving a clear response about whether you make work lists and if they are effective. Use simple, coherent sentences with relevant details.

예시: Yes, I often make lists for my work tasks, and they help me stay organised and complete my duties efficiently.

제안: Your answer is difficult to understand. Try to express your ideas clearly by using simple sentences and relevant vocabulary. Explain reasons logically and use linking words to connect your points.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they are very busy and feel it takes too much time to write everything down.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks focus. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using relevant vocabulary and linking words to make your answer coherent.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I always have my phone with me, making it easy to add or check items anytime.

× Yes. So why not I make a list of when I'm near my shop, I'm not because I think I'm going the market if I think I'm not everything and I forget.

✓ Yes. So why don't I make a list? When I'm near my shop, I don't because I think if I go to the market without a list, I might forget everything.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction breaks it into clearer sentences and uses appropriate question form and conjunctions to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes, I'm now I am everything I'm now work I'm there and sometimes someday helping my friend come there and we are the best friend from the the visiting the place. It's a very enjoying feel and working at times.

✓ Yes, now I do everything at work. Sometimes I help my friend when he comes there, and we are best friends visiting the place. It feels very enjoyable to work at times.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity, corrects verb tenses, and improves word choice to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Because short time we are man, we are man busy and her life from the so no, it is doesn't turn out from the bottom of the understand it is in the market.

✓ Because we are busy people with little time, and life is hectic, so it doesn't work out well when shopping at the market.

The original sentence is incoherent and grammatically incorrect. The correction clarifies the meaning by restructuring the sentence and using appropriate vocabulary and grammar.

× I am I'm not your perfect to make a list on my phone because it is always my new formula and it is easy. Basically it is international alumni topics, so now I like to.

✓ I am not perfect at making a list on my phone because it is always new to me, but it is easy. Basically, it is an international alumni topic, so now I like to do it.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and contains unclear phrases. The correction adjusts pronoun usage and clarifies the meaning, making the sentence grammatically correct and understandable.