List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然且有语法错误，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并使用更准确的表达。

예시: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I often buy extra items spontaneously, so a list doesn't really help me.

제안: 回答较简短，缺少连贯的连接词，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I usually make a plan for my work because it helps me remember important tasks and stay organized throughout the day.

제안: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，但可以增加更多细节和连接词，使表达更自然。

예시: Well, it depends on personality traits. Some people prefer making lists to organize their tasks and stay focused; however, others find it unnecessary and prefer to rely on their memory instead.

제안: 回答自然且内容丰富，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Sometimes I prefer writing lists on paper, especially when I'm studying, because it helps me remember better. However, other times I use my smartphone since it's more convenient and efficient.

× No, to be honest I don't make shopping list because I always need a few things at first about and I'm buying much more so that's why shopping list didn't work for me.

✓ No, to be honest I don't make shopping lists because I always need a few things at first and I'm buying much more, so that's why shopping lists don't work for me.

shopping list 应该用复数形式 shopping lists，因为这里指的是一般性的购物清单，不是特指一个。动词也要和复数主语一致，使用 don't work。

× Yes, I need to make plan for my work.

✓ Yes, I need to make a plan for my work.

make plan 前面缺少不定冠词 a，因为 plan 是可数名词，表示一个计划。

× Yes, I need to make plan for my work. It does work sometimes it could remind me of important work tasks.

✓ Yes, I need to make a plan for my work. It does work; sometimes it can remind me of important work tasks.

句子中缺少分号或句号导致句子结构不清晰，另外 could 更合适用 can 表示一般能力。

× No, to be honest I don't make shopping list because I always need a few things at first about and I'm buying much more so that's why shopping list didn't work for me.

✓ No, to be honest I don't make shopping lists because I always need a few things at first, and I'm buying much more, so that's why shopping lists don't work for me.

句中 'at first about' 结构不正确，应该去掉 about，使用逗号分隔句子，使表达更清晰。

× Yes, I need to make plan for my work.

✓ Yes, I need to make a plan for my work.

动词短语 make a plan 后面需要介词 for 来表示计划的对象，这里使用正确。

× Well, sometimes I prefer writing it down on paper, especially when I'm studying.

✓ Well, sometimes I prefer to write it down on paper, especially when I'm studying.

prefer 后面接动词时，通常用不定式 to write 而不是动名词 writing。