List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误且句子较长，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和表达。

예시: I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it time-consuming. Instead, I buy things spontaneously when they catch my attention.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，建议使用更简洁的句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I have tried making daily study plans, but they don't work well for me because unexpected tasks often interrupt my schedule.

제안: 回答内容不够连贯，语法错误较多，建议简化表达，使用连接词，并具体说明原因，使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and pressured by them, which can reduce their flexibility during the day.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，清楚表达偏好和理由。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and saves time. There are many apps designed for planning, and it's easier than finding paper at home.

× I don't really make a list when shopping because I think that's very time consuming and I'm a really lazy person, So what I do instead is spontaneously buy things that attracts my attention when I saw them.

✓ I don't really make a list when shopping because I think that's very time consuming and I'm a really lazy person, so what I do instead is spontaneously buy things that attract my attention when I see them.

这里的动词需要与复数主语保持一致。'things' 是复数，所以动词用复数形式 'attract'。另外，时态应保持一致，'saw' 应改为现在时 'see'，因为描述的是习惯性动作。

× I don't really make a list when shopping because I think that's very time consuming and I'm a really lazy person, So what I do instead is spontaneously buy things that attracts my attention when I saw them.

✓ I don't really make a list when shopping because I think that's very time consuming and I'm a really lazy person, so what I do instead is spontaneously buy things that attract my attention when I see them.

句中 'saw' 是过去时，但描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 'see'。

× I've tried before for planning what I will be studying as a daily plan or schedule, but personally for me it doesn't really work because it often seems to appear random since that will interrupt my plan.

✓ I've tried before planning what I will be studying as a daily plan or schedule, but personally for me it doesn't really work because it often seems to appear random since that interrupts my plan.

'will interrupt' 表示将来时，但这里描述的是习惯性或经常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时 'interrupts'。

× I've tried before for planning what I will be studying as a daily plan or schedule, but personally for me it doesn't really work because it often seems to appear random since that will interrupt my plan.

✓ I've tried before planning what I will be studying as a daily plan or schedule, but personally for me it doesn't really work because it often seems to appear random since that interrupts my plan.

'tried before for planning' 中 'for' 用法不当，应直接用动名词 'planning' 作为宾语。

× Making this seems very useful when people want to organize their events and give a clear structure about what they are going to do in rest of the day, but sometimes limited what people can do and people might feel self pressure from that list because they're for they will impose themselves.

✓ Making this seems very useful when people want to organize their events and give a clear structure about what they are going to do in the rest of the day, but sometimes it limits what people can do and people might feel self-pressure from that list because they will impose it on themselves.

'sometimes limited' 缺少主语，应加 'it'。'self pressure' 应为复合名词 'self-pressure'。'they're for they will impose themselves' 语法混乱，改为 'they will impose it on themselves' 更准确。

× Making this seems very useful when people want to organize their events and give a clear structure about what they are going to do in rest of the day, but sometimes limited what people can do and people might feel self pressure from that list because they're for they will impose themselves.

✓ Making this seems very useful when people want to organize their events and give a clear structure about what they are going to do in the rest of the day, but sometimes it limits what people can do and people might feel self-pressure from that list because they will impose it on themselves.

'in rest of the day' 缺少定冠词，应为 'in the rest of the day'。

× I do pivot making on my phone because it's very time. It's not very time consuming and seems convenient for for me because there are applications designed especially for making plans and schedules and also finding a paper in my home is very.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's not very time-consuming and seems convenient for me because there are applications designed especially for making plans and schedules, and also finding paper in my home is difficult.

'do pivot making' 语法错误，应为 'prefer making lists'。'very time' 不完整，应为 'not very time-consuming'。'for for me' 重复，应删去一个 'for'。'finding a paper in my home is very' 不完整，应补充完整表达。