List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question first, then provide a clear example. Also, use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. For instance, say "Sometimes I don't make a shopping list because I prefer to remember what I need, but last week I did make one, which helped me shop efficiently."

예시: Sometimes I don't make a shopping list because I prefer to remember what I need. However, last week I made a list before going to the grocery store, which helped me buy everything efficiently.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammar and vocabulary issues. Use more precise words like "tasks" instead of "stuff" and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to improve coherence, such as "so" or "which".

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a list for my studies. For example, I list all the tasks I need to complete in the next few days and rank them by priority, which helps me finish my work before the deadline.

제안: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state the reasons with proper sentence structure and linking words. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they think it's a waste of time, and others feel they won't follow the list, so it seems useless to them."

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they think it's a waste of time. Others feel that even if they make a list, they won't follow it, so it seems useless to them.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Use linking words like "but" properly and avoid awkward phrases. For example, "I used to make lists on paper because it was easy to revise them, but now I prefer using my phone since I can check my tasks anytime at school."

예시: I used to make lists on paper because it was easy to revise them. However, now I prefer using my phone since I can check my tasks anytime while at school.

× For example, last week I make a shopping list before I go to the grocery, so I got most of the stuff effectively and efficient.

✓ For example, last week I made a shopping list before I went to the grocery store, so I got most of the stuff effectively and efficiently.

The sentence refers to a past event ('last week'), so the verbs should be in the past tense. 'Make' should be 'made' and 'go' should be 'went'. Also, 'grocery' should be 'grocery store' for clarity. 'Efficient' is an adjective but here it should be the adverb 'efficiently' to modify the verb 'got'.

× For example, last week I make a shopping list before I go to the grocery, so I got most of the stuff effectively and efficient.

✓ For example, last week I made a shopping list before I went to the grocery store, so I got most of the stuff effectively and efficiently.

The phrase 'go to the grocery' is incomplete; it should be 'go to the grocery store' to correctly indicate the place. Prepositions and nouns must be used together properly to convey clear meaning.

× For example, I will list all the stuff I need to do for this few days and least rank them by the priority, which really helps me to finish the work before the deadline.

✓ For example, I will list all the stuff I need to do for these few days and rank them by priority, which really helps me finish the work before the deadline.

The quantifier 'this few days' is incorrect; it should be 'these few days' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun. Also, 'least rank' is incorrect; it should be 'rank' or 'prioritize'. 'By the priority' should be 'by priority' without 'the'.

× I think there would be a few reasons some people think making this to waste their time and some people maybe they think even they make a list they will not follow it, so it's kind of useful useless for them.

✓ I think there are a few reasons: some people think making lists wastes their time, and some people think that even if they make a list, they will not follow it, so it's kind of useless for them.

The original sentence has run-on and awkward conjunctions. 'There would be' should be 'there are' for present reasons. 'Making this to waste' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists wastes'. The sentence needs proper conjunctions and punctuation to separate ideas clearly.

× For me, I think it's really changed a lot before I make the list on the paper because it's clearly to modify the revised.

✓ For me, I think it has really changed a lot. Before, I made the list on paper because it was easier to modify and revise.

'Make the list on the paper' should be 'made the list on paper' to use correct article and past tense. 'It's clearly to modify the revised' is incorrect; it should be 'it was easier to modify and revise'. Prepositions and verb forms need correction for clarity.

× But now I used my phone to make the list because when I go to school I can just check my phone about what I need to do in the day school.

✓ But now I use my phone to make the list because when I go to school, I can just check my phone to see what I need to do during the school day.

'Used' is past tense but the sentence refers to current habit, so it should be 'use'. 'Check my phone about' is incorrect; it should be 'check my phone to see'. 'In the day school' is awkward; 'during the school day' is correct. Verb tense and prepositions need adjustment.