List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“Remember Me”应为“remind me”。建议注意动词时态和大小写，避免语法错误，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go to the supermarket because it helps me remember the things I need to buy.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“haven't do”应为“haven't done”，且有重复和口头语“uh”。建议减少口头语，注意动词形式，回答更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, I like to make lists at work because they help me remember tasks I haven't completed. It definitely works well for me.

제안: 回答表达清晰，但可以用更丰富的词汇和连接词使表达更自然流畅。建议增加连接词和具体解释，使回答更完整。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more casual lifestyle and don't want to feel controlled by schedules.

제안: 回答基本清楚，但“make a modification”用词不够地道，建议使用“edit”或“change”。同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone or in my notebook because it's easier to edit or change items when needed.

× Yes, I make a list if I will go to the supermarket because I think a list can Remember Me the things that I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I make a list if I am going to the supermarket because I think a list can help me remember the things that I need to buy.

这里使用了“if I will go”，在表示将来计划时，英语中通常用现在进行时或一般现在时，而不是将来时。应改为“if I am going to”。另外，“Remember Me”应为“help me remember”，动词搭配错误。

× because I think it can help me to remember the work that I haven't do.

✓ because I think it can help me to remember the work that I haven't done.

“haven't do”中“do”应为过去分词“done”，因为现在完成时态后面需要用过去分词。

× I think it's because they like a casual life.

✓ I think it's because they like a casual lifestyle.

“a casual life”表达不自然，通常用“a casual lifestyle”表示“随意的生活方式”，更符合英语习惯。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone or on my notebook because I think it's easier to make a modification.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone or in my notebook because I think it's easier to make modifications.

“on my notebook”应改为“in my notebook”，因为笔记本是容器，内容写在里面。并且“a modification”应为复数“modifications”，表示多次修改。