List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有些词汇使用不当。建议加强语法基础，注意句子完整性，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

예시: I don't always make a list when I shop, but I usually do it on weekends when I need to buy many items, such as food and daily necessities, to stock up.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，词汇使用不准确。建议练习正确的句子结构，使用更恰当的词汇，并注意连贯性。

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list almost every morning. It helps me stay organized and prioritize important tasks that need to be done first.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法和表达错误较多，逻辑不连贯。建议多练习表达原因时的句型，注意句子完整和逻辑连贯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because seeing many unfinished tasks can make them feel anxious or stressed.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少关键内容和连贯性。建议练习完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Many productivity apps have reminders that help me keep track of my tasks and mark them as finished.

× Not always, but I usually make one when I have a lot of to buy, like on weekends when I go to the supermarket to stock up on food and daily necessities.

✓ Not always, but I usually make one when I have a lot to buy, like on weekends when I go to the supermarket to stock up on food and daily necessities.

句子中“a lot of to buy”中的“of”是不必要的，正确表达是“a lot to buy”，表示“有很多东西要买”。这是单复数使用中的错误，去掉“of”使表达更准确。

× Yes I do almost every morning. I like to make A to do list with my daily work text and something important.

✓ Yes, I do almost every morning. I like to make a to-do list with my daily work tasks and something important.

“A to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”，且“to do list”应连字符连接为“to-do list”。另外，“work text”应为“work tasks”，更符合语境。文章使用错误需要注意大小写和固定搭配。

× It really makes me stay organized and know what should need to be done first.

✓ It really helps me stay organized and know what needs to be done first.

原句结构不清晰，“makes me stay organized”改为“helps me stay organized”更自然；“what should need to be done”语法错误，正确表达为“what needs to be done”。句子结构错误导致表达不流畅。

× Well, I think for some people they say a lot of unfinished text lists may further feel anxious or stressed.

✓ Well, I think some people say a lot of unfinished lists may make them feel anxious or stressed.

“a lot of unfinished text lists”中“text”多余且不合适，应去掉；“may further feel”表达不正确，应为“may make them feel”，这里涉及单复数和搭配问题。

× It really make more precious and it is simple some people don't like.

✓ It really makes things more precious, and simply some people don't like it.

“make”应为第三人称单数形式“makes”；“it is simple”表达不自然，改为“simply”；句子缺少宾语，补充“things”和“it”使句子完整。现在分词和动词形式使用错误。

× Well, I definitely prefer to do a listing by using my.

✓ Well, I definitely prefer to make a list by using my phone.

“do a listing”表达不自然，应为“make a list”；“using my”后缺少名词，补充“phone”使句子完整。句子结构错误导致表达不完整。

× It is very convenient and there are a lot of productivity app like for example it always has a reminder and finish back to the next.

✓ It is very convenient and there are a lot of productivity apps; for example, they always have reminders and allow you to finish tasks and move on to the next.

“a lot of productivity app”中“app”应为复数“apps”；“it always has a reminder and finish back to the next”表达不完整且语法错误，改为“they always have reminders and allow you to finish tasks and move on to the next”。单复数和句子结构错误。