List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够完整且表达不够自然。建议在回答时直接回答问题，并用完整句子表达原因，避免语法错误和重复。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it hard to decide what to buy in advance.

제안: 回答中断且不完整，缺少连贯性。建议完整表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I am currently a student, so I don't have a job yet. However, if I work in the future, I will definitely make lists because they help me organize tasks efficiently.

제안: 回答语法错误较多且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，明确表达原因，并避免重复。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and might not follow a fixed plan.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但句子结构不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法和连贯性。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's always with me and more convenient than carrying paper lists around.

× No, I just shop freely because I have a difficulty in making a choice. So I don't make a.

✓ No, I just shop freely because I have difficulty making a choice. So I don't make a list.

句子结构不完整，'I don't make a.'缺少宾语，导致句子不完整。应补充完整宾语'list'，使句子完整通顺。

× Now I'm a student. I don't work, but I think if I work in the future, I will make a list because when I have to work, I must do things regularly. And it is.

✓ Now I'm a student. I don't work, but I think if I work in the future, I will make a list because when I have to work, I must do things regularly. And it is important.

句子末尾'And it is.'不完整，缺少表语，导致句子不完整。应补充完整表达，如'important'，使句子完整。

× Because some people they don't like to make plans and they may don't follow the plans so. They don't like to make.

✓ Because some people don't like to make plans and they may not follow the plans, so they don't like to make lists.

句中'and they may don't'语法错误，应为'may not'。此外，句子断裂，缺少宾语'lists'，且连接词使用不当，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I prefer to make a list of my phone because, nowadays I have mobile phones with me and more convenient than making paper because paper, I couldn't take it everywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays I have my mobile phone with me and it's more convenient than using paper because I can't take paper everywhere.

介词使用错误，'make a list of my phone'应为'make a list on my phone'。此外，句子结构混乱，需调整表达使其更自然流畅。