List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and filler words to make your answer more natural and concise. Also, use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and remember what I need. For example, if I notice only a few tomatoes left in the fridge, I add them to my list to make sure I buy enough.

제안: Avoid filler sounds like 'uh' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide clear, specific details.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize tasks effectively. For example, I focus on urgent assignments first, which allows me to meet deadlines and reduce stress throughout the day.

제안: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing or incomplete sentences. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion, and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful or overwhelming, especially if they have anxiety. However, I believe that lists can help most people stay organized and reduce worry.

제안: Work on sentence clarity and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is always with me and easy to access. Additionally, I can mark items as completed, which helps me keep track of my progress.

× Yes, I do make a list before I go for a shopping because it helps me to keep things organized and it also helps me to to make note of what I what are the items that I need.

✓ Yes, I do make a list before I go shopping because it helps me to keep things organized and it also helps me to make note of the items that I need.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'for a'. Also, 'to to make note of what I what are the items that I need' is redundant and awkward; it should be simplified to 'to make note of the items that I need' for clarity and correctness.

× For example, in case if my if I have less a couple of tomatoes left in the fridge, I could make a note that, you know, I need some extra tomatoes.

✓ For example, if I have only a couple of tomatoes left in the fridge, I could make a note that I need some extra tomatoes.

The phrase 'less a couple of tomatoes' is incorrect because 'less' is used with uncountable nouns; 'a couple of tomatoes' is plural and countable, so 'only a couple of tomatoes' is appropriate. Also, 'in case if my if I have' is redundant and should be simplified to 'if I have'.

× Yes I do. I always make a list for my work because it helps me keep organized and prioritize my tasks effectively.

✓ Yes, I do. I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my tasks effectively.

The phrase 'helps me keep organized' is awkward; the correct expression is 'helps me stay organized' to convey maintaining organization properly.

× For example, I can focus on urgent assignments first and then UH and stay organized throughout the day.

✓ For example, I can focus on urgent assignments first and then stay organized throughout the day.

The phrase 'and then UH and stay organized' contains a filler 'UH' and an unnecessary conjunction 'and'. Removing 'UH and' improves sentence clarity and flow.

× Uh having more time for me to to crack.

✓ This gives me more time to relax.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Having more time for me to to crack' is incorrect and does not convey a clear meaning. Replacing it with 'This gives me more time to relax' provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence.

× Some people believe making this is not gonna make their life much easier because some some tend to have some medical issues which would result in making them more stressed and worried.

✓ Some people believe that making lists does not make their life much easier because they tend to have medical issues which result in them feeling more stressed and worried.

The phrase 'making this is not gonna make their life much easier' is awkward and informal; 'making lists does not make their life much easier' is clearer. Also, 'some some tend to have some medical issues' is repetitive; simplifying to 'they tend to have medical issues' improves clarity. 'Result in making them more stressed' should be 'result in them feeling more stressed' for correct expression.

× However, I I don't believe that people who don't make There is no one who makes lists.

✓ However, I don't believe that there is no one who makes lists.

The original sentence is confusing and contains repeated words. The phrase 'people who don't make There is no one who makes lists' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning by removing redundancy and correcting pronoun use.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it would be easy and accessible for me to everywhere I go because I do carry my phone never nevertheless wherever I am.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy and accessible for me wherever I go since I always carry my phone wherever I am.

The phrase 'easy and accessible for me to everywhere I go' is incorrect; 'accessible for me wherever I go' is correct. Also, 'I do carry my phone never nevertheless wherever I am' is awkward and incorrect; 'I always carry my phone wherever I am' is the proper expression.

× Not only that, in addition to it, I can also mark it as completed because they they are certain features which are available.

✓ Not only that, I can also mark items as completed because there are certain features available.

The phrase 'in addition to it' is unnecessary and awkward here. 'Mark it as completed' is unclear; 'mark items as completed' is better. 'They they are certain features which are available' is repetitive and incorrect; 'there are certain features available' is correct.