List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中出现了不相关或错误的词汇（如“totally gay person”），影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议使用更贴切的词汇表达购物习惯，并且简洁明了地回答问题。

예시: Yes, I always make a detailed shopping list before I go out. It helps me remember everything I need to buy for myself and my friends, so I don't forget anything important.

제안: 回答结构不够清晰，表达有些混乱。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持，使用连词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a study plan for my work. For example, when preparing for a health test, I schedule what topics to study during specific hours, which helps me stay organized and focused.

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰。建议用更自然的表达方式，给出合理的理由，并避免语法错误。

예시: I'm not sure, but maybe some people find making lists boring or unnecessary. They might prefer to shop freely without following a strict plan.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题。建议使用正确的语法，简洁表达偏好，并用连词连接句子。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier to add items anytime. Also, I can easily check and update the list when I go shopping.

× I'm a totally gay person, so every time I go shopping with my friend I have a nearly well-rounded list about anything I want, anything my friend need, and even more specifically I will plan anything in this shop.

✓ I'm a totally gay person, so every time I go shopping with my friend I have a nearly well-rounded list about anything I want, anything my friend needs, and even more specifically I will plan anything in this shop.

这里的主语是my friend，属于第三人称单数，谓语动词need应加-s变为needs，表示主谓一致。

× For example, when I prepare my health test, I will make list about my study progress, about these two hours I need to prepare what and later I will prepare what I think is quite useful.

✓ For example, when I prepare my health test, I will make a list about my study progress, about these two hours I need to prepare what and later I will prepare what I think is quite useful.

list是可数名词，前面需要加冠词a，表示一个清单。

× Perhaps they consider it a useless book and when they're shopping there were no photos step by step in the list.

✓ Perhaps they consider it a useless book and when they're shopping there are no photos step by step in the list.

句子中描述的是一般现在时的情况，there were用过去时不合适，应改为there are。

× Firstly. It's much more easier to make a list whenever I have sorted item I need to bought.

✓ Firstly, it's much easier to make a list whenever I have sorted items I need to buy.

much more easier是冗余表达，正确用法是much easier；item应为复数items；动词buy用原形，bought是过去式，不符合句意。