List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I often make a list when I shop because I like that don't like forgetting the experience of forgetting to buy something that I need. So in case of that I always make a list so I won't miss something that I need to buy.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, of course. I have so many deadlines in my life and I have so many works to do and if I don't make a list I will never able to do everything that I needed to do and everything I wanted to do. So I always make a schedule the day before and it has always worked.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Well, first of all, not everybody enjoyed the process of making a schedule which is a little bit tedious. And second of all, when having done a timetable, you are constrained by the time there and many people feel uncomfortable about it. They want to do things freely and spontaneously.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer make a list on my phone because nowadays we carried our phones to everywhere we went and our phones can spontaneously alarm remind of our next schedule. While papers you need to carry a small notebooks anywhere with you. It is very easy that you have forgotten your to take your ****.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。
예시: Yes, I often make a shopping list because I don't want to forget anything important. It helps me remember all the items I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答较长且有语法错误，建议使用更简洁的句子，注意时态和单复数形式，增强表达的清晰度。
예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because I have many deadlines. Making a schedule the day before helps me manage my tasks effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答结构较好，但部分表达不够自然，建议使用更地道的短语和连接词，使表达更流畅。
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious. Also, following a strict schedule can feel restrictive, and they prefer to act spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意动词形式和句子完整性，避免使用不明确的词汇。
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. Phones can remind me of my schedule automatically, unlike paper lists which are easy to forget.
문법
× Yes, I often make a list when I shop because I like that don't like forgetting the experience of forgetting to buy something that I need.
✓ Yes, I often make a list when I shop because I don't like the experience of forgetting to buy something that I need.
句中使用了错误的连词“because I like that don't like”，应改为“because I don't like”，表示原因。连词使用错误会导致句子意思混乱。
× if I don't make a list I will never able to do everything that I needed to do and everything I wanted to do.
✓ if I don't make a list I will never be able to do everything that I need to do and everything I want to do.
缺少情态动词“be”导致表达不完整，应为“will never be able to”。同时时态应保持一致，使用现在时“need”和“want”。
× I have so many works to do
✓ I have so much work to do
“work”作为不可数名词，不能用复数形式“works”，应使用“much work”。
× I prefer make a list on my phone
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone
动词“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”，缺少“to”是不正确的用法。
× we carried our phones to everywhere we went
✓ we carry our phones everywhere we go
时态应为一般现在时，且“carry”是正确动词形式；“to everywhere”中“to”多余，应直接用“everywhere”。
× you need to carry a small notebooks anywhere with you
✓ you need to carry a small notebook anywhere with you
“notebooks”是复数，前面有不定冠词“a”，应使用单数“notebook”。
× It is very easy that you have forgotten your to take your ****.
✓ It is very easy to forget to take your ****.
原句结构混乱，应使用不定式结构“to forget to take”表达容易忘记某物。
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