List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误，且表达不够简洁自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意语法准确性。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything important. However, I often end up buying extra items that catch my eye in the supermarket.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达不够流畅的问题。建议使用更自然的连接词，并注意句子完整性。

예시: Yes, I always make lists for work because they help me remember important appointments and meet deadlines. Moreover, they keep me organized throughout the day.

제안: 回答内容不够具体，表达有些模糊。建议提供更明确的理由，并用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed if they can't complete all tasks. Also, they might think their tasks are too simple to bother writing down.

제안: 回答未完整，且句子结构不够自然。建议完整表达观点，并使用更自然的句式。

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone, especially with apps that send timely reminders. This way, I never miss important appointments.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop when so that I will not lose the item that I need to buy.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop so that I will not lose the item that I need to buy.

句子中出现了重复的连词“when”和“so that”，导致句子结构混乱。应删除多余的“when”，使句子更通顺。

× Besides that can also help me get organized when working.

✓ Besides, that can also help me get organized when working.

句子缺少逗号，导致连接词“Besides”和主句之间结构不清晰。应在“Besides”后加逗号，使句子结构完整。

× So tasks they need to do maybe too simple to write on.

✓ So the tasks they need to do may be too simple to write down.

短语“write on”用法不当，正确表达应为“write down”，表示“写下”。此外，缺少冠词“the”，且“maybe”应拆分为“may be”。

× There is no doubt that I will make a list on my phone, especially using those list apps because these apps can send me timely reminders so that I will never miss some important appointments and.

✓ There is no doubt that I will make a list on my phone, especially using those list apps, because these apps can send me timely reminders so that I will never miss any important appointments.

句子末尾出现了多余的连词“and”，且缺少逗号分隔从句，导致句子不完整。应去掉“and”，并在“apps”后加逗号，最后将“some”改为“any”更符合否定语境。