List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me shop more carefully and avoid buy some things that are unnecessary for me. For example, when I have a list, I can only buy the things that I actually need, which saves me both time and money.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Absolutely yes. I always make a list before I start working because I can manage my time better and it can help me save a lot of time. It's really work. It really works because without a list I may be very busy with all kinds of things.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Well, there are several reasons that some people dislike making lists. For example, they may think that they are fixed in the plan, that they tend to leave a casual life, so making this make let them feel uncomfortable.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer make making a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me every day, but I seldom carry a paper with me. So make a list on my phone is much is much more convenient than on paper.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 85.0제안: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了例子，但有语法错误，如“avoid buy”应为“avoid buying”，且句子结构稍显重复。建议注意动词形式和句子简洁性，提高表达的自然流畅度。
예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me shop more carefully and avoid buying unnecessary items. For instance, having a list ensures I only purchase what I need, which saves both time and money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“It’s really work”应为“It really works”，且表达略显重复。建议注意动词形式和避免重复，提高语言的准确性和简洁性。
예시: Absolutely. I always make a list before I start working because it helps me manage my time better and saves a lot of time. It really works since without a list, I might get overwhelmed with various tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，如“making this make let them feel uncomfortable”不通顺。建议加强句子结构练习，使用更准确的表达方式，使答案更自然流畅。
예시: Well, some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and prefer to live a more casual life. Therefore, making lists can make them feel uncomfortable.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 75.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I prefer make making”应为“I prefer making”，且“much is much more convenient”重复。建议注意动词形式和避免重复，使表达更简洁自然。
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry it with me every day, while I rarely have paper. So, making lists on my phone is much more convenient than on paper.
문법
× ...avoid buy some things that are unnecessary for me.
✓ ...avoid buying some things that are unnecessary for me.
动词avoid后应接动名词形式，不能直接接动词原形。这里应使用buy的动名词形式buying。
× It's really work.
✓ It really works.
主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词work应加-s变为works。
× ...that they tend to leave a casual life, so making this make let them feel uncomfortable.
✓ ...that they tend to live a casual life, so making this makes them feel uncomfortable.
1. leave应为live，意思为“过着随意的生活”；2. make let结构错误，应为makes them，主语making this为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s。
× I prefer make making a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me every day...
✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because I carry my phone with me every day...
动词prefer后应接动名词making，不能接不定式make。
× So make a list on my phone is much is much more convenient than on paper.
✓ So making a list on my phone is much more convenient than on paper.
句中重复出现is much，应删除多余部分；且make应改为动名词making，作为主语使用。
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