List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有很多语法错误和表达不清晰的地方，导致意思难以理解。建议你用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并用具体的细节支持你的观点。例如，说明你为什么做购物清单，以及这样做的好处。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the supermarket. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: 你的回答语法不完整，表达不流畅。建议你用完整的句子回答问题，并用连接词使句子更连贯。同时，具体说明清单如何帮助你安排工作和提高效率。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. By doing this, I can manage my time more clearly and work more efficiently.

제안: 你的回答内容混乱且难以理解。建议你先明确回答问题，然后用具体原因支持你的观点。可以谈谈有些人觉得做清单麻烦或者不习惯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things in their own way.

제안: 你的回答表达不够清晰，有语法错误。建议你用完整句子表达你的偏好，并说明原因。可以用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient. We always carry our phones, so it's easy to check the list anytime, unlike paper lists which can be lost.

× Yes, I make Kirby Easter when I wash up.

✓ Yes, I make a shopping list when I wash up.

原句中“Kirby Easter”是错误的词语搭配，应该使用“a shopping list”表示购物清单。这里是形容词或名词使用错误，需用正确的词语表达意思。

× Because if you don't make a list you cannot sure what you need to buy and what will you forget to buy.

✓ Because if you don't make a list, you cannot be sure what you need to buy and what you will forget to buy.

原句中“cannot sure”缺少动词“be”，正确表达应为“cannot be sure”，这是情态动词用法错误。

× You may need to batch with the supermarket to buy this.

✓ You may need to go to the supermarket to buy these.

原句中“batch with the supermarket”结构不正确，应该使用“go to the supermarket”表示去超市。句子结构错误导致表达不清。

× Yes, I make a list for my work because make a list can help me to ensure which is priority and I can imagine my time more clear and efficiency and the.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because making a list can help me to ensure which tasks are a priority, and I can manage my time more clearly and efficiently.

原句中“make a list can help me”缺少动名词形式，应为“making a list can help me”。“which is priority”应为“which tasks are a priority”，单复数和表达不当。句尾“more clear and efficiency”应为副词形式“more clearly and efficiently”。

× The cost list can help them to find which work is privacy and the brute to do that, and the Nicholas can ensure they do they can not forget anything.

✓ The to-do list can help them to find which work is a priority and the best way to do that, and the list can ensure they do not forget anything.

原句中“cost list”应为“to-do list”，“privacy”应为“priority”，“brute”应为“best”，“Nicholas”应为“list”，词语使用错误，导致句意不明。

× I prefer light to make leaves on my phone because I think phone is so convenient and we go here and carry our phone but write a list on the paper we may not remember.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I think the phone is very convenient; we go everywhere and carry our phones, but if we write a list on paper, we may forget it.

原句中“prefer light to make leaves”词语错误，应为“prefer to make lists”。“go here”应为“go everywhere”，“write a list on the paper we may not remember”表达不清，需调整句子结构。