List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I do, because I think making a list can help me choose products conveniently in order to save my time.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes I do, I make a list for my study and it helps me improve my mark greatly.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Everyone has their own choices. I think they don't like make lists because they think making a list. Wasted their time.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere and I think phone is very convenient. But if I make a list on paper, I always forget it.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 75.0제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，且有些表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免冗余，例如“choose products conveniently”可以改为“shop more efficiently”。
예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me shop more efficiently and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中“make a list for my study”表达不够准确，且缺少连接词使句子显得生硬。建议使用更自然的表达，并用连接词连接句子。
예시: Yes, I make lists for my studies, and they really help me improve my grades significantly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中语法错误较多，句子不完整，表达不清晰。建议注意语法，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。
예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes their time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答较为自然，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复“phone”。
예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, which is very convenient. On the other hand, I tend to forget paper lists.
문법
× I think they don't like make lists because they think making a list. Wasted their time.
✓ I think they don't like making lists because they think making a list wastes their time.
动词后面接动名词时，应该用动词的-ing形式。这里'don't like'后面应该接'making'，而不是'make'。另外，句子中'wasted'应改为'wastes'，因为主语是单数形式'making a list'，需要用第三人称单数形式。
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