List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，比如“without a shop”应为“without a list”，且句子结构重复，影响表达的自然流畅。建议注意句子结构的完整性和准确性，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I often make a shopping list because without it, I tend to forget what I need to buy. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't exceed my budget.

제안: 回答中有较多重复和语气词，影响流畅性。建议减少重复，使用更简洁的句子表达，同时注意语法正确性。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list every morning to organize my tasks for the day. Following the list helps me work efficiently and complete everything on time.

제안: 回答中有重复和发音错误（如“Liz”应为“lists”），建议注意发音准确性和句子简洁，表达更自然。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they never developed the habit when they were young. Also, if their work is unpredictable, it can be hard to plan ahead with a list.

제안: 回答中有过多的语气词“umm”，影响流畅性。建议减少填充词，使用更连贯的句子，并注意表达清晰。

예시: For work, I prefer making lists on paper because I don't want to check my phone frequently at the office. However, for daily life, I use my phone to make lists since it can remind me based on time or location.

× because without a shop I often forget what I should buy.

✓ because without a shopping list I often forget what I should buy.

这里的'shop'用错了，应该用'shopping list'表示购物清单，'shop'是商店，语义不符。属于单复数及词汇使用错误。

× With a shop I can buy something I need and also I can control it.

✓ With a shopping list I can buy something I need and also I can control it.

同上，'shop'应为'shopping list'，表示购物清单。

× I can make sure that I I will not out of budget.

✓ I can make sure that I will not go over budget.

这里缺少动词，且表达不完整，应该是'go over budget'表示超出预算。

× Yes, ABS of course I make a list for my work, umm, every morning in my in my work day, I will make uh, I make a list that make list that I should do uh, in one day.

✓ Yes, of course I make a list for my work. Every morning in my work day, I make a list of things I should do in one day.

句子结构混乱，重复且不连贯，需简化并正确表达。

× And then I, I do the work by the list.

✓ And then I do the work according to the list.

表达更自然，'by the list'不合适，应为'according to the list'。

× I think it is it work very well.

✓ I think it works very well.

主谓不一致，'it'为第三人称单数，动词应加s。

× I think some people don't like making Liz because they don't have this habit from from the from when they they are when they were young.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they don't have this habit from when they were young.

'Liz'应为'lists'，且句子中多余重复词需删除。

× because they don't have this habit from from the from when they they are when they were young.

✓ because they didn't have this habit from when they were young.

时间状语为过去，动词时态应为过去式。

× Also they maybe their work is unpredictable so they cannot make lists.

✓ Also maybe their work is unpredictable so they cannot make lists.

'maybe'位置错误，应放在句首或主语前。

× I like to make a list on paper because you know, umm, at office, I don't want to, I don't want to check up my phone, umm, regularly to offer.

✓ I like to make a list on paper because, you know, at the office, I don't want to check my phone regularly during work.

'at office'应为'at the office'，'check up my phone'应为'check my phone'，'to offer'不合适，改为'during work'更自然。

× But when it comes to umm, daily life, I like to make a list on my phone because, uh, it can remind me, umm, according to time or location.

✓ But when it comes to daily life, I like to make a list on my phone because it can remind me based on time or location.

'according to'用法不当，改为'based on'更合适。