List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且缺乏细节，建议直接回答问题并补充具体原因或习惯，避免简单重复。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，建议使用清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使内容连贯。

예시: Yes, I make a list when I have tasks with clear deadlines. For example, if I have an exam tomorrow, I plan my whole day to prepare effectively.

제안: 回答内容不清晰且表达混乱，建议明确表达观点并用具体理由支持，避免模糊和错误用词。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel uncertain about the future and think that strict plans can limit their freedom.

제안: 回答不够连贯且表达不清，建议使用完整句子并说明原因，增强表达的逻辑性。

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I find it easier to organize my thoughts, and I often cross out completed tasks to keep track of my progress.

× No, I usually buy the thing I want to buy.

✓ No, I usually buy the things I want to buy.

这里的'thing'应该用复数形式'things'，因为通常购物时会买多样物品，使用复数更符合语境。

× Yes, if I have something to do and it has clearly deadline, I will make the next.

✓ Yes, if I have something to do and it has a clear deadline, I will make the next.

'clearly'是副词，修饰动词或形容词，句中应使用形容词'clear'来修饰名词'deadline'，且'deadline'前应加不定冠词'a'。

× Maybe tomorrow I have a exam and I will make the all day schedule.

✓ Maybe tomorrow I have an exam and I will make the all-day schedule.

'exam'以元音音素开头，前面应使用冠词'an'。'all day'作为形容词修饰'schedule'时应连写为'all-day'。

× I think some people don't like making this because there is many trade on the future.

✓ I think some people don't like making this because there are many trades in the future.

'trade'应使用复数形式'trades'，且'be'动词应与复数主语一致用'are'，'on the future'应改为'in the future'。

× I think some people don't like making this because there is many trade on the future.

✓ I think some people don't like making this because there are many trades in the future.

介词'on'用法错误，表示时间应使用'in the future'。

× Also some people think strangers will limit our life.

✓ Also some people think strangers will limit our lives.

'life'应使用复数形式'lives'，因为指的是多个人的生活。

× If I need to make a list, I will take it on the paper and I do this I will draw a line on the board.

✓ If I need to make a list, I will write it on paper and when I do this, I will draw a line on the board.

'take it on the paper'表达不当，应改为'write it on paper'。'and I do this'缺少连接词，应改为'and when I do this'。