List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of saying 'I'm not having a good capability to remember the things', say 'because I have a poor memory'.

예시: Yes, I always make a list on my mobile phone before shopping because I have a poor memory, and it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

제안: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, check grammar and sentence completion to make your answer effective.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it reduces the chances of mistakes. Moreover, it helps me manage my time efficiently and stay organized throughout the day.

제안: Avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, correct vocabulary errors like 'lifts' instead of 'lists'.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and feel that making lists is an unnecessary burden for their tasks.

제안: Make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and naturally.

예시: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I carry it with me all the time, which makes it convenient compared to using paper.

× Yes, I'll make list whenever I'm going for any type of shopping to the market because I'm not having a good capability to remember the things.

✓ Yes, I'll make a list whenever I'm going for any type of shopping to the market because I don't have a good capability to remember things.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Also, 'I'm not having' is incorrect for ability; 'I don't have' is the correct present tense form. 'The things' is better as 'things' without 'the' because it refers to things in general.

× So that is why I make list in my mobile phone.

✓ So that is why I make a list in my mobile phone.

Again, 'list' is a singular countable noun and needs the article 'a' before it.

× Yes, definitely I make a list for work as it helps most because uh, if I make uh, any type of list for my work, it have last chances of mistakes because uh due to this list I came to know about time and I can be.

✓ Yes, definitely I make a list for work as it helps most because, uh, if I make any type of list for my work, it has fewer chances of mistakes because, uh, due to this list I come to know about time and I can be.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'it' (subject-verb agreement). 'Last chances' is incorrect; 'fewer chances' is appropriate for countable plural. 'Came' should be 'come' to match present tense context.

× Well, most of the people do not like to make lists because they are good at remembering things.

✓ Well, most people do not like to make lists because they are good at remembering things.

'Most of the people' is less natural; 'most people' is preferred in general statements.

× So that is why, uh, they do not like to make lists and they think it is uh, overburden on them by making lifts for uh, any type of work.

✓ So that is why, uh, they do not like to make lists and they think it is an overburden for them to make lists for any type of work.

'Overburden on them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'overburden for them'. Also, 'making lifts' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'making lists'.

× Well, I'd like to make a list on my mobile phone because in this modern era, I like to carry my mobile phone daily in my pocket.

✓ Well, I'd like to make a list on my mobile phone because in this modern era, I like to carry my mobile phone daily in my pocket.

No correction needed here for singular/plural or grammar issues.

× So that is why, uh, I like to make list on my mobile phone mobile phone rather than on paperwork.

✓ So that is why, uh, I like to make a list on my mobile phone rather than on paper.

'Make list' should be 'make a list' as 'list' is singular countable noun. Also, 'paperwork' refers to documents, but 'on paper' is the correct phrase for writing lists on physical paper.