List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by providing more specific details and linking words to make it more natural and effective. Try to expand your answer with reasons or examples and use linking words to connect your ideas.

예시: I try to make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need. Although it's not a habit for me yet, I believe it's a good habit to develop since it saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

제안: Your answer is informative and mostly clear, but it would benefit from better sentence structure and linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors and be more concise.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my studies, including daily tasks, upcoming projects, and priorities. It usually works well because I allow some flexibility to adjust the list as needed, which helps me manage my time effectively.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well, but it is a bit long and repetitive. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve flow and clarity.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by the tasks they have to complete. Additionally, seeing a long list can cause frustration or stress, especially if the deadlines are tight.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete at the end. To improve, try to complete your thoughts fully, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with grammar and sentence structure.

예시: It depends on the situation. Usually, I prefer making lists on my phone for studies and shopping because it's convenient and I won't forget it at home. However, sometimes I like using a paper list because crossing off items feels more satisfying and helps me stay organized.

× I allow flexibility in my list so any adjustments that's needed will be allowed and usually I think it's a good time management.

✓ I allow flexibility in my list so any adjustments that are needed will be allowed and usually I think it's good time management.

The phrase 'that's needed' is incorrect because 'that' refers to plural 'adjustments', so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Using 'that are needed' correctly matches the plural subject 'adjustments'.

× Some people might not like making a list because they might feel restricted to the things that they listed out to do, and people might feel frustrated or just even stressed looking at the list of things that they need to accomplish that day or for whatever period of time that they set out for.

✓ Some people might not like making a list because they might feel restricted to the things that they have listed out to do, and people might feel frustrated or even stressed looking at the list of things that they need to accomplish that day or for whatever period of time that they set out for.

The phrase 'they listed out to do' is incorrect because it lacks the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense, which is needed here to indicate completed actions relevant to the present. The correct form is 'they have listed out to do'.

× When I do make a list I make them on my phone so I can check them and won't be forgetting the paper at home.

✓ When I do make a list I make it on my phone so I can check it and won't be forgetting the paper at home.

The word 'list' is singular, so the pronouns referring to it should also be singular ('it' instead of 'them'). Using 'them' incorrectly suggests plural, which causes a mismatch in number agreement.