List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt veren bir konu cümlesi ile başlatıp, ardından nedenlerinizi ve örneklerinizi bağlaçlarla destekleyerek açıklamalısınız. Örneğin, 'I don't usually make a shopping list because I can easily remember what I need. For instance, when I go to the grocery store, I just keep the items in my mind and buy them.' gibi daha net ve akıcı ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: I don't usually make a shopping list because I can easily remember what I need. For instance, when I go to the grocery store, I just keep the items in my mind and buy them.

제안: Cümlenizi daha açık ve doğal hale getirmek için, doğrudan soruya yanıt veren bir cümle ile başlayıp, nedenlerinizi ve detayları bağlaçlarla destekleyerek açıklamalısınız. Ayrıca, dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat etmelisiniz. Örneğin, 'I don't make lists for work because I find it easier to remember tasks mentally. Using paper doesn't suit my needs.' gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: I don't make lists for work because I find it easier to remember tasks mentally. Using paper doesn't suit my needs.

제안: Cevabınızda daha açık ve mantıklı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayan bir cümle ile başlayıp, nedenleri açıklayan destekleyici cümleler eklemelisiniz. Ayrıca, dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimine dikkat etmelisiniz. Örneğin, 'Some people may dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, even though they might forget things. Everyone has different habits.' gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory, even though they might forget things. Everyone has different habits.

제안: Cevabınızda çelişkili ifadeler var ve cümle yapısı hatalı. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayan net bir cümle kurmalı ve nedenlerinizi açıklamalısınız. Örneğin, 'I don't prefer making lists either on paper or on my phone because I find it unnecessary.' gibi daha doğru ve anlaşılır ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

예시: I don't prefer making lists either on paper or on my phone because I find it unnecessary.

× No, I wouldn't because it's not necessary for me.

✓ No, I don't because it's not necessary for me.

The use of 'wouldn't' is incorrect here because the question is about a habitual action in the present. The correct modal verb is 'do' for present habits.

× I can remember all of the things when I go grocery store, what I need to buy it.

✓ I can remember all of the things when I go to the grocery store, what I need to buy.

The preposition 'to' is missing before 'the grocery store'. Also, 'buy it' is redundant after 'what I need to buy'.

× Like I don't buy another else.

✓ Like I don't buy anything else.

The phrase 'another else' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'anything else' to indicate additional items.

× I just keep on my mind and I buy it.

✓ I just keep it in my mind and I buy it.

The phrase 'keep on my mind' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' as in 'keep it in my mind'.

× No, I don't. I just keep on my mind.

✓ No, I don't. I just keep it in my mind.

The pronoun 'it' is missing to refer to the list or things to remember, and the preposition 'in' is needed.

× I really I keeping all of the things on my mind because it's so easy and it's not necessary.

✓ I really keep all of the things in my mind because it's so easy and it's not necessary.

The verb 'keeping' is incorrectly used here; the base form 'keep' is correct after 'I really'.

× We can't use paper for this purpose.

✓ We can't use paper for this purpose.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× It's not good for the my purpose actually.

✓ It's not good for my purpose actually.

The article 'the' is unnecessary before 'my purpose' because 'my' already specifies the noun.

× They maybe don't chip in their mind, they can forgot and maybe it can be huge.

✓ Maybe they don't keep it in their mind, they can forget and maybe it can be huge.

'Chip in their mind' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep it in their mind'. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' after 'can'.

× We cannot know why they doing it, Yeah.

✓ We cannot know why they are doing it, yeah.

The verb 'doing' needs the auxiliary 'are' to form the present continuous tense.

× I do not prefer a make a list because it's not unnecessary.

✓ I do not prefer to make a list because it's unnecessary.

The phrase 'a make a list' is incorrect; it should be 'to make a list'. Also, 'not unnecessary' is a double negative; 'unnecessary' alone suffices.