List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: "my mother she") và chia câu ngắn gọn hơn để dễ hiểu hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý một cách mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I don't usually make a list when I shop. However, my mother often writes down the items on a piece of paper along with their prices, so we can plan our budget carefully. I think making a list is a great way to stay organized and avoid buying unnecessary things.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa (ví dụ: "when I have a release that schedule"). Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

예시: I don't usually make a list for my work. However, when I have a busy schedule, I find that making a list helps me stay organized and focused. For example, it prevents me from forgetting important tasks and allows me to manage my time more efficiently.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy mở rộng thêm một chút lý do hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

예시: I think some people, including myself, don't like making lists because plans can change unexpectedly. Therefore, they prefer not to make lists so they can adjust their tasks more flexibly. For instance, if something urgent comes up, they can easily rearrange their priorities.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tự nhiên, rõ ràng và có ví dụ cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm một vài từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "make" nhiều lần.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's much easier to edit or update them whenever I need. For example, adding or removing items can be done quickly without making a mess, unlike on paper where erasing can look untidy. Moreover, since I always have my phone with me, I won't forget my list when I go out.

× I don't usually make a list when I shop, but my mother she would usually write the items down on a piece of paper along with the press beside it so we can plan out our budget carefully.

✓ I don't usually make a list when I shop, but my mother usually writes the items down on a piece of paper along with the prices beside it so we can plan out our budget carefully.

The pronoun 'she' is redundant after 'my mother'. Also, 'would usually' is better expressed as 'usually writes' to match habitual action in present tense. 'Press' is a typo and should be 'prices'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For example, it prevents me from forgetting important thing and allows me to manage my time more efficiently.

✓ For example, it prevents me from forgetting important things and allows me to manage my time more efficiently.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' to agree with 'important' and the context. This is a singular and plural issue, but since it relates to adjective-noun agreement, it fits under incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs.

× I think some people don't like making lists just like me, because sometimes things don't go just as planned and they would prefer to not make a list so they can change and adjust things along the way more easily.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists, just like me, because sometimes things don't go as planned and they prefer not to make a list so they can change and adjust things along the way more easily.

The phrase 'would prefer to not make' is awkward; 'prefer not to make' is more natural. Also, 'just as planned' should be 'as planned'. The comma after 'lists' improves sentence clarity. These changes correct modal verb usage and improve sentence flow.

× Additionally, I always have my phone with me so I won't forget my list when I go out.

✓ Additionally, I always have my phone with me so I don't forget my list when I go out.

Using 'won't forget' implies future intention, but the context is habitual action, so present tense 'don't forget' is more appropriate. This corrects the modal verb usage and tense consistency.