List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整，但“draw down a list”表达不够地道，建议使用更常见的表达如“make a list”。此外，回答中可以适当使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying things impulsively, which saves money.

제안: 回答内容丰富，但存在语法错误，如“It work like a charm”应为“It works like a charm”。建议注意主谓一致，并使用更正式的词汇替代口语表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized. It works very well and improves my efficiency. Additionally, crossing off completed tasks gives me a great sense of accomplishment.

제안: 回答中表达不够完整，最后一句话不清晰，影响理解。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并避免口语化词汇如“loads of”。

예시: There are several reasons why some people dislike making lists. For example, they may believe it wastes time. Furthermore, they might feel that unexpected events often occur, making their previous plans less useful.

제안: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误，如“making list”应为“making lists”，以及“to do it”多余。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词增强句子连贯性。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I can access my notes anytime and anywhere. This convenience makes my life easier. Moreover, I can easily share my plans with friends or colleagues.

× I make To Do List for work all the time.

✓ I make To Do Lists for work all the time.

这里的“List”应该用复数形式“Lists”，因为表示经常制作多个待办事项列表。

× It work like a charm for me.

✓ It works like a charm for me.

主语是单数“it”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“works”，以保持主谓一致。

× I can pull up my memo app anytime, anywhere to jot down things I need to do it.

✓ I can pull up my memo app anytime, anywhere to jot down things I need to do.

句中“do it”中的“it”多余，应去掉，保持句子简洁且语法正确。