List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些重复和语法错误，建议简洁明了地表达，比如直接说“我经常用手机列购物清单，这样可以帮助我记住需要买的东西，也能节省时间”。注意避免重复表达和语法错误。

예시: Yes, I often make a shopping list on my phone because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议直接回答是否做工作清单，并说明原因，比如“我不习惯为工作做清单，因为那样会让我感到压力更大”。注意句子结构和逻辑连贯。

예시: I don't usually make lists for my work because it makes me feel more stressed than usual.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清。建议简洁表达原因，比如“有些人记忆力好，觉得没必要做清单，而且做清单可能会花费时间”。注意句子完整和逻辑。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and think it's unnecessary. Also, making lists can take extra time.

제안: 回答表达不够自然，语法有误。建议说“我更喜欢用手机做清单，因为比传统的纸质清单更方便，也减少了对笔和纸的依赖”。注意语法和用词准确。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than traditional paper lists and reduces our reliance on pen and paper.

× Yes, I often do a list on my phone to remember to remind me to buy something necessary for my to my life.

✓ Yes, I often make a list on my phone to remind me to buy things necessary for my life.

The phrase 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'make' when referring to creating a list. Also, 'something necessary for my to my life' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'things necessary for my life' to correctly express the idea and use plural form for multiple items.

× Yes, I often do a list on my phone to remember to remind me to buy something necessary for my to my life.

✓ Yes, I often make a list on my phone to remind me to buy things necessary for my life.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'phone' here, but the phrase 'to remember to remind me' is redundant and awkward. It should be simplified to 'to remind me' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I don't have this habit to make a list for my work.

✓ I don't have the habit of making a list for my work.

The phrase 'this habit to make' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'the habit of making' because 'habit' is followed by 'of' plus a gerund verb form.

× It makes me feel stressed then than the normal.

✓ It makes me feel more stressed than usual.

The phrase 'then than the normal' is incorrect. 'Than' is the correct comparative conjunction, and 'more stressed than usual' is the proper way to express comparison. 'Then' is an adverb of time and is misused here.

× Someone don't someone don't have like making this because they have a good memory so they so they think they not necessary to do a list.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory, so they think it's not necessary to make a list.

'Someone' is singular and incorrectly used; 'some people' is the correct plural form. Also, 'don't have like making this' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making lists.' The sentence also needs proper subject-verb agreement and clearer structure.

× It may cost custom time.

✓ It may take extra time.

The phrase 'cost custom time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'take extra time' to indicate that something requires additional time.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it's a convenient way than the traditional ways to make a list.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it's a more convenient way than traditional methods.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by a gerund ('making'). Also, 'a convenient way than the traditional ways' is incorrect; it should be 'a more convenient way than traditional methods' to correctly compare.

× It can reduce our rely on the pen and paper.

✓ It can reduce our reliance on pen and paper.

The phrase 'reduce our rely' is incorrect; the noun 'reliance' should be used instead of the verb 'rely.' Also, 'the pen and paper' is better expressed without 'the' when speaking generally.