List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは自然ですが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があり、意味が少し不明瞭です。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、文法の正確さを向上させましょう。

예시: Actually, I don't usually make a shopping list because I shop frequently and can remember what I need. Also, I enjoy discovering new items while shopping.

제안: 答えは質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不完全な文があり、意味が伝わりにくいです。文を完全にし、明確な接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

예시: Yes, I make a list for work every morning, and it works well. I write down my tasks and prioritize them to stay organized throughout the day.

제안: 答えが不明瞭で、文法的な誤りや繰り返しがあります。理由を明確にし、具体的な説明を加えて、より論理的に答えましょう。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it easy to remember tasks without writing them down, and they prefer to organize their priorities mentally.

제안: 答えが途中で終わっており、内容が不完全です。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させて、より説得力のある答えにしましょう。

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me organize my plans better. Also, I find it easier to review my list without distractions from my phone.

× Actually, I don't make any list when I shop because I often go to shopping so I can remember what I want and also I really enjoy finding something new and get that one get.

✓ Actually, I don't make any list when I shop because I often go shopping so I can remember what I want and also I really enjoy finding something new and getting that one.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' where 'shopping' is a gerund acting as the object of 'go'. Also, 'get that one get' is incorrect; it should be 'getting that one' using the gerund form to maintain parallel structure with 'finding something new'.

× Yes, I make a list for work and I think it works well. Every morning I lift up what I have to do that day and I make priorities. Following that prior or.

✓ Yes, I make a list for work and I think it works well. Every morning I list what I have to do that day and I set priorities. Following that, I prioritize.

The phrase 'lift up' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'list' meaning to write down. 'Make priorities' is better expressed as 'set priorities'. The phrase 'Following that prior or' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'Following that, I prioritize' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I think that's because we can remember easily and also we can we can organize what is the priorities.

✓ I think that's because we can remember easily and also we can organize what the priorities are.

The phrase 'what is the priorities' is incorrect because 'priorities' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; rephrasing to 'what the priorities are' is grammatically correct.

× I prefer to make a list on paper. I have some reasons for this. First reason is that by writing down the list I can I can organize my plan and also.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper. I have some reasons for this. The first reason is that by writing down the list, I can organize my plan better.

The sentence 'First reason is that by writing down the list I can I can organize my plan and also.' is incomplete and contains repetition ('I can I can'). It should be corrected to a complete sentence with proper punctuation and removal of repetition. Adding 'better' clarifies the benefit.