List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. For example, instead of 'It is very beneficial for us' and 'It's helped me to remember everything I need', you can say 'Making a list helps me remember everything I need and saves time.'

예시: Yes, I usually make a grocery list on my phone before shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need and saves time by keeping me organized.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and lacks linking words. Use correct verb forms and connect your ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I work in a corporate job, so my schedule is hectic. Therefore, I make a list of daily tasks and set reminders, which helps me stay organized.'

예시: I work in a corporate job, so my schedule is very hectic. Therefore, I make a list of my daily tasks and set reminders, which helps me manage my work efficiently.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases like 'It is also a manager.' Focus on explaining reasons clearly and use linking words. For example, 'Some people think making lists is unnecessary because they prefer to remember tasks mentally. However, I find lists helpful because they ensure I don't forget important tasks.'

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it unnecessary and prefer to remember tasks mentally. However, I personally make lists as they help me complete my daily tasks without forgetting anything.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct sentence structures and linking words to compare options clearly. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easy to use and I can set reminders. On the other hand, I tend to forget tasks if I write lists on paper.'

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is easy to use and I can set reminders. On the other hand, when I write lists on paper, I sometimes forget to check them.

× This way I avoiding forgetting important items and can show more efficiently.

✓ This way I avoid forgetting important items and can shop more efficiently.

The verb 'avoiding' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'avoid' to match the subject 'I' and the sentence structure. Also, 'show' is a typo and should be 'shop' to make sense in context.

× and it's work.

✓ and it works.

The phrase 'it's work' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it works' to indicate that the list and reminder function properly. 'Works' is the third person singular present tense of the verb 'work'.

× some people thinks that it is unnecessary,

✓ some people think that it is unnecessary,

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'think' without the 's' to agree in number.

× I also set a reminder so I can't forget it.

✓ I also set a reminder so I don't forget it.

The phrase 'I can't forget it' implies inability to forget, which is incorrect here. The intended meaning is that the reminder helps prevent forgetting, so 'I don't forget it' is appropriate.

× It is also a manager.

✓ It is also a reminder.

The word 'manager' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'reminder' which fits the context of setting reminders to remember tasks.

× I personally to make a list on phone because it is very easy for me

✓ I personally make a list on my phone because it is very easy for me

The phrase 'I personally to make' is incorrect; the verb 'make' is missing. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession.

× if I forget any task in my daily routine I set a reminder so it is remind me.

✓ if I forget any task in my daily routine I set a reminder so it reminds me.

The phrase 'it is remind me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it reminds me' where 'reminds' is the third person singular present tense verb.

× On the other hand if I write a list on paper I forget.

✓ On the other hand, if I write a list on paper, I forget it.

The sentence is missing commas for clarity and the object 'it' after 'forget' to specify what is forgotten.