List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
I'm a very forgetful person, so for me it's very important to make a list while shopping. Usually I make a list before going to the grocery as uh, it uh, become very easier for me to buy the things which I which I need.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
I always like to make notes on my workplace which really helps me a lot to meet my deadlines. I must say that I always check in the evening before leaving the work like I have mentioned on my notebook is all done and anyone I will do on the first half of the morning next day.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I saw some people really don't like to making notes pickers, might be they find it boring and wasting of time. For example on my work I have one of my team member who really don't like to make notes as she think that making notes is not helpful, we should.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
Well, and there's a sophisticated era most probably I use my phone to make the notes. I have downloaded the app with the name Notepad and usually I prefer that app to make the notes because I always keep my phone with my I always keep my phone with myself. So it's very easy to open the phone and.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 65.0제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition to make your answer more natural and fluent. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clearer explanation.
예시: I'm quite forgetful, so I always make a shopping list before going to the grocery store. This helps me buy everything I need efficiently and prevents me from forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 60.0제안: Focus on clearer sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid ambiguity. Try to be more concise and precise in your explanation.
예시: Yes, I always make notes at work, which helps me meet my deadlines. For example, I review my notebook every evening to ensure all tasks are completed, and I plan what to do first thing the next morning.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 55.0제안: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Avoid incomplete sentences and provide a complete explanation with linking words. Be specific about reasons why some people dislike making lists.
예시: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and think it wastes time. For instance, a team member of mine avoids note-taking because she believes it doesn't help her work efficiently.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 60.0제안: Avoid incomplete sentences and repetition. Use clear and concise language with proper linking words to explain your preference effectively.
예시: In this digital age, I prefer making lists on my phone. I use a Notepad app because I always have my phone with me, making it easy to access and update my notes anytime.
문법
× I saw some people really don't like to making notes pickers, might be they find it boring and wasting of time.
✓ I saw some people really don't like making notes, might be they find it boring and a waste of time.
The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'making' without 'to'. Also, 'wasting of time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a waste of time'.
× For example on my work I have one of my team member who really don't like to make notes as she think that making notes is not helpful, we should.
✓ For example, at my work I have one team member who really doesn't like to make notes as she thinks that making notes is not helpful.
In the third person singular, verbs require an 's' at the end: 'doesn't' instead of 'don't', and 'thinks' instead of 'think'. Also, 'one of my team member' should be 'one team member' or 'one of my team members'. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected accordingly.
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