List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes I do. I'm the kind of person that doesn't really have a good memory, so whenever I go to the shop I always jot down what I need to buy first, because when I'm at the shop I tend to forget the things that I really need and instead buy those that I don't need at the moment.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I often make a list for the things that I need to do that I have need to I need to do, but I usually don't follow those. You know, I tend to because I want to like be organized, but then at the end of the day, I want I won't be able to follow those, but still I would be able to.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think it's not a matter of liking it or not liking it. It's maybe because they don't really need to list those things. For example, if they're well organized person then they wouldn't be needing a list to do things or to whenever they go shopping or for the tasks of the day they need to do for the day. I think it's not just a matter of preference.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
Well, I prefer to make a list on paper if it's for work, because I tend to remember those or if I'm studying. But if, for example, it's something that, uh, a code that has, uh, this really memorable for me or like that I've read on the Internet where scrolling down and I'm gonna take that down using the phone.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 75.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số phần lặp lại không cần thiết. Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget important items. This helps me stay focused and avoid buying unnecessary things.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt mạch lạc, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.
예시: Yes, I often make to-do lists to stay organized, but sometimes I don't follow them strictly because unexpected tasks come up.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 70.0제안: Ý tưởng của bạn tốt nhưng câu trả lời hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Some people don't like making lists because they are naturally organized and can remember tasks without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 65.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ ngữ thừa và ngập ngừng, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên luyện tập nói trôi chảy, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn.
예시: I prefer making lists on paper for work or study because it helps me remember better. However, for quick notes like codes or links, I use my phone.
문법
× Yes, I often make a list for the things that I need to do that I have need to I need to do, but I usually don't follow those.
✓ Yes, I often make a list of the things that I need to do, but I usually don't follow it.
The original sentence contains redundancy and awkward phrasing ('that I have need to I need to do'). The correction simplifies the sentence to use the present tense correctly and removes unnecessary repetition, improving clarity and grammatical correctness.
× You know, I tend to because I want to like be organized, but then at the end of the day, I want I won't be able to follow those, but still I would be able to.
✓ You know, I tend to because I want to be organized, but then at the end of the day, I won't be able to follow them, but I still try.
The original sentence has tense inconsistency and unclear phrasing ('I want I won't be able to follow those'). The correction uses present tense appropriately and clarifies the meaning by correcting verb forms and pronoun usage.
× I think it's not a matter of liking it or not liking it.
✓ I think it's not a matter of liking or not liking it.
The phrase 'a matter of liking it or not liking it' is redundant. The correction removes the unnecessary repetition of 'it' to improve sentence flow and grammatical correctness.
× If they're well organized person then they wouldn't be needing a list to do things or to whenever they go shopping or for the tasks of the day they need to do for the day.
✓ If they're well-organized people, then they wouldn't need a list to do things, whether when they go shopping or for the tasks they need to do during the day.
The original sentence has pronoun number disagreement ('they're well organized person') and awkward phrasing. The correction fixes plural agreement and clarifies the sentence structure for better grammar and meaning.
× Well, I prefer to make a list on paper if it's for work, because I tend to remember those or if I'm studying.
✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on paper if it's for work because I tend to remember those, or if I'm studying.
The original sentence is missing a comma before 'or' which can cause confusion. The correction adds the comma to separate clauses properly, improving readability and grammatical correctness.
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