List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态一致性，使用完整句子，并避免重复表达。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来说明做购物清单的好处。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and prevents me from forgetting important items. This habit is especially useful since I tend to have a poor memory.

제안: 回答中出现了不相关或错误的词汇，句子不连贯，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，准确表达做工作清单的作用，并注意词汇的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me stay organized and focused, especially when I have difficult tasks. It also reminds me of the next steps I need to take.

제안: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用合适的连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. Especially those who have a good memory may feel they don't need to write things down.

제안: 回答较为自然，但有小的语法错误和表达不够流畅。建议注意介词使用和句子结构，使表达更准确自然。

예시: Frankly speaking, I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have my smartphone with me. This way, I can add items anytime and anywhere without worrying about forgetting something.

× From my perspective, make a list.

✓ From my perspective, making a list.

这里缺少动名词形式，'make a list' 应改为 'making a list'，因为它作为主语使用。动名词在句中作主语时，需使用 -ing 形式。

× It's my daily routine habits when I shopping.

✓ It's my daily routine habit when I shop.

'habits' 应为单数 'habit'，因为前面有 'my daily routine' 修饰，表示习惯的单数形式；'I shopping' 应改为 'I shop'，动词需用一般现在时。

× I used to make list before I go to shopping because it can help me save time and avoid forget some forgetting something.

✓ I used to make a list before I go shopping because it can help me save time and avoid forgetting something.

'make list' 应为 'make a list'，需要冠词；'go to shopping' 应为 'go shopping'，'go' 后面直接跟动词原形表示去做某事；'avoid forget some forgetting something' 结构混乱，应改为 'avoid forgetting something'，'avoid' 后应接动名词。

× So make a list it's nice to bad memory person.

✓ So making a list is nice for a person with a bad memory.

句子结构不完整，需用动名词 'making a list' 作主语；'nice to bad memory person' 结构错误，应为 'nice for a person with a bad memory'，表达更准确。

× Absolutely Michaelist, it's a good beginner for my whole day.

✓ Absolutely, Michael, it's a good start for my whole day.

'Michaelist' 可能是误写，应为 'Michael'；'a good beginner' 用词不当，应为 'a good start'，更符合表达习惯。

× It can help me still organize the animal focused when I start a difficult work.

✓ It can help me still organize and stay focused when I start difficult work.

'animal focused' 词不达意，应为 'stay focused'；'a difficult work' 中 'work' 是不可数名词，前面不加冠词。

× It helped me a lot and helped me to understand what to do next step.

✓ It helps me a lot and helps me to understand what to do next.

根据上下文，描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 'helps'；'next step' 前缺少冠词，且此处可省略 'step' 直接用 'next'。

× Make lists is not a habit for everyone, so someone may think making this waste of their time and it's unnecessary for them to do these things who especially for who have a good memory to do very kinds of things.

✓ Making lists is not a habit for everyone, so some people may think making them is a waste of their time and unnecessary, especially for those who have a good memory to do many kinds of things.

'Make lists' 应为动名词 'Making lists' 作主语；'someone' 应为复数 'some people'；'making this waste' 应为 'making them is a waste'；'who especially for who have' 结构混乱，应为 'especially for those who have'；'very kinds of things' 应为 'many kinds of things'。

× Frankly speaking, I prefer to make a list on my phone because my smartphone always comes with me and I can add it my list anywhere, anytime, instantly without worry about forget something.

✓ Frankly speaking, I prefer to make a list on my phone because my smartphone always comes with me and I can add to my list anywhere, anytime, instantly without worrying about forgetting something.

'add it my list' 缺少介词，应为 'add to my list'；'without worry about forget something' 应为 'without worrying about forgetting something'，'without' 后接动名词形式。