List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议你直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并且避免重复。可以用连接词来使回答更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need. However, if I am just shopping for myself, I might not make a list. But if I am helping someone else, I always write a list to avoid forgetting anything.

제안: 回答较为直接，但句子结构和用词可以更自然。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且注意语法，如“what the next work should I do”应调整为更自然的表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I do my homework because it helps me focus. Also, it reminds me of the tasks I need to complete next.

제안: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达含糊。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体理由支持观点，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Honestly, I am not sure, but I think some people don't like making lists because they already know what to do next. Also, they might be very talented or only have a few tasks to do, so they don't need lists.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议简化句子，直接表达观点，并用连接词说明原因，使回答更流畅。

예시: I definitely prefer making lists on paper because I am a teenager and I like playing on my phone. Using paper helps me focus better on my studies without distractions.

× Probably I do 'cause I'm shopping it.

✓ Probably I do 'cause I'm shopping.

The verb 'shopping' should not be followed by the pronoun 'it' here because 'shopping' is used as an activity, not a transitive verb requiring an object. Removing 'it' corrects the sentence.

× Just relax myself and even if I got something what I really want to buy, yes, I will remember.

✓ Just relax myself and even if I get something that I really want to buy, yes, I will remember.

The phrase 'got something what' is incorrect; 'got' should be 'get' to match present tense, and 'what' should be 'that' as a relative pronoun. This corrects the sentence structure and tense.

× But if someone told me that I will help her to buy something, yes, I will take a list.

✓ But if someone tells me that, I will help her to buy something; yes, I will take a list.

The conditional sentence requires present tense 'tells' instead of past 'told' to match the future intention. Also, adding a comma improves clarity.

× Yes for sure. I always take a list when I do my homework.

✓ Yes, for sure. I always make a list when I do my homework.

The verb 'take a list' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make a list' when referring to creating one. Adding a comma after 'Yes' improves readability.

× I think it can help me focus on the studies and it can tell me what the next work should I do.

✓ I think it can help me focus on my studies and tell me what work I should do next.

The phrase 'what the next work should I do' is an incorrect question structure within a statement. Reordering to 'what work I should do next' corrects the sentence structure.

× I don't know honestly, but I think they are done making lists because they really know what the next what they should do and they have more talented or they only do just one or two things.

✓ I don't know honestly, but I think they have stopped making lists because they really know what they should do next, and they are more talented or they only do one or two things.

'Are done making lists' is incorrect; 'have stopped making lists' is appropriate. 'What the next what they should do' is redundant and incorrect; 'what they should do next' is correct. 'More talented' needs 'are' to be a proper clause. Also, 'only do just one or two things' is simplified to 'only do one or two things' for clarity.

× Definitely is on paper because you know, I'm a teenager right now and I couldn't against a mobile phone or electronic things 'cause I'm very like to play the mobile phone and it's don't put me to focus on the study.

✓ Definitely on paper because you know, I'm a teenager right now and I can't resist a mobile phone or electronic devices because I really like to play on the mobile phone and it doesn't help me focus on my studies.

'Definitely is on paper' should be 'Definitely on paper' for natural expression. 'Couldn't against' is incorrect; 'can't resist' is appropriate. 'I'm very like to play' is incorrect; 'I really like to play' is correct. 'It's don't put me to focus' should be 'it doesn't help me focus'. 'The study' should be 'my studies' for correct article and plural usage.