List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答比较自然且内容完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，例如使用“because”或“so”来连接原因和结果。

예시: Yes, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以增加一些连接词如“which”或“so that”来增强句子连贯性。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work, which helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I use a digital app so that I get reminders and feel satisfied when I check things off.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“winding it down”和“start walking on their task”不符合英语习惯。建议多练习正确表达原因和行为的句型。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. They believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down, so they prefer to start working immediately.

제안: 回答自然且内容丰富，可以尝试使用更多连接词如“which”或“so”来增强句子流畅度。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down, which makes it easier for me to remember things, and I enjoy crossing items off when I'm done.

× Some people don't like making this because they think it takes too much time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time.

这里的'making this'不符合语境，应该用'making lists'，因为前文提到的是制作清单。动词后面接动名词时，宾语应明确且与上下文一致。

× They believe they can remember what they need to do without winding it down, so they prefer to just start walking on their task.

✓ They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing it down, so they prefer to just start working on their task.

原句中'winding it down'和'start walking on their task'均为错误搭配，应分别改为'writing it down'（写下来）和'start working on their task'（开始做任务），以符合正确的动词搭配和表达习惯。