List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and give a specific reason or example.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping for groceries because it helps me shop more efficiently. For instance, having a list prevents me from forgetting important items and saves time. Therefore, it makes the whole process more convenient.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, explaining your reason with supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Avoid vague phrases like 'It does make any sense' and clarify your ideas.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to rely on my memory. I believe my subconscious mind helps me remember tasks, so I find lists unnecessary in this case.

제안: Improve your sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect ideas. Provide specific reasons and avoid repetition. Keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and intuition. If they have a strong memory, they may feel that lists are unnecessary for them.

제안: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Keep your answer within 5 sentences and provide specific reasons.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Unlike paper lists, I can carry my phone everywhere easily. Also, I can quickly add or check items with just a few clicks.

× Yeah, I make a list when I'm going to shopping the list of groceries items and because it will helpful to shop easily and very convenient, it will make convenient to me to pick some of item easily.

✓ Yeah, I make a list when I'm going shopping for groceries because it is helpful to shop easily and very convenient; it makes it convenient for me to pick some items easily.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund form 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'groceries items' should be 'groceries' or 'grocery items'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Yeah, I make a list when I'm going to shopping the list of groceries items and because it will helpful to shop easily and very convenient, it will make convenient to me to pick some of item easily.

✓ Yeah, I make a list when I'm going shopping for groceries because it is helpful to shop easily and very convenient; it makes it convenient for me to pick some items easily.

The phrase 'some of item' is incorrect; it should be 'some items' to correctly quantify the noun.

× No, I don't make a list for a work. It does make any sense to list for a work. It's come from my subconscious mind, so I will.

✓ No, I don't make a list for work. It doesn't make any sense to make a list for work. It comes from my subconscious mind, so I won't.

The preposition 'for a work' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable here and does not need an article. Also, 'does make any sense' should be 'doesn't make any sense' to express negation. 'It's come' should be 'It comes' for present tense. 'So I will' is unclear; 'so I won't' fits the context better.

× I think they believe their memory powers and their intuition, subconscious mind and that's why they don't like to make list and if if some peoples are more power in their memory so they don't want to need to make a list.

✓ I think they believe in their memory powers, intuition, and subconscious mind, and that's why they don't like to make lists. If some people have stronger memory, they don't feel the need to make a list.

The phrase 'some peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is already plural. 'More power in their memory' is awkward; 'stronger memory' is better. Also, 'don't want to need to make a list' is incorrect; 'don't feel the need to make a list' is clearer.

× I like to make a list in my phone. It is very convenient and rather than listing paper phone very helpful to carry every we we, we can be able to carry everywhere and just click and click on list.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone. It is very convenient, and rather than listing on paper, the phone is very helpful to carry everywhere. We can carry it easily and just click on the list.

The preposition 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' when referring to using a phone as a device. The phrase 'listing paper phone' is unclear; it should be 'listing on paper'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.