List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengulangan yang membuatnya kurang alami. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list because I often forget what to buy when I am at the market. Making a list helps me remember the items I need and avoid buying unnecessary things.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang lengkap dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa yang membuatnya sulit dipahami. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang lebih jelas dan lengkap dengan struktur kalimat yang benar.

예시: I usually don't make a detailed list for my work, but sometimes I write short notes. This helps me remember important tasks when I forget them.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah mengandung ide yang baik, tetapi perlu diperbaiki tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata agar lebih alami dan jelas. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan hindari pengulangan.

예시: Some people might not like making lists because they think it's unnecessary or unimportant. Also, they may prefer to rely on their memory to remember what to do.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan kata yang salah. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih tepat dan jelas, serta hindari kesalahan pengucapan kata.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's simple and convenient. Whenever I need to check my tasks, I just open my phone and look at the list. However, if I don't have a pen, I sometimes use paper to write a list.

× Yeah, sometimes I make a list when I shop because sometimes I forgot when I already in the market, but I forget what I must buy and then I don't buy the the things, I buy another things.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I make a list when I shop because sometimes I forget when I am already in the market, but I forget what I must buy and then I don't buy the things, I buy other things.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense but the context requires present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. Also, 'already in the market' needs the verb 'am' to be grammatically correct. 'The the things' is a repetition error and 'another things' should be 'other things' because 'things' is plural.

× Yeah, sometimes I make a list when I shop because sometimes I forgot when I already in the market, but I forget what I must buy and then I don't buy the the things, I buy another things.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I make a list when I shop because sometimes I forget when I am already in the market, but I forget what I must buy and then I don't buy the things, I buy other things.

The phrase 'another things' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular countable nouns. Since 'things' is plural, the correct quantifier is 'other'.

× Yeah, sometimes I make a list when I shop because sometimes I forgot when I already in the market, but I forget what I must buy and then I don't buy the the things, I buy another things.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I make a list when I shop because sometimes I forget when I am already at the market, but I forget what I must buy and then I don't buy the things, I buy other things.

The preposition 'in' is less appropriate here; 'at the market' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate location in this context.

× Effort. I never make a list, but sometimes I make a note. So when I I forgot I know what I must do when I.

✓ Effort. I never make a list, but sometimes I make a note. So when I forget, I know what I must do.

The verb 'forgot' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'forget' to indicate habitual action. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× So when I I forgot I know what I must do when I.

✓ So when I forget, I know what I must do.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and clarifies the meaning.

× I don't know, maybe they think it's unnecessary I think and not important. Or maybe they can remember what must to do.

✓ I don't know, maybe they think it's unnecessary and not important. Or maybe they can remember what they must do.

The phrase 'what must to do' is incorrect; it should be 'what they must do' to include the subject pronoun 'they' and remove the unnecessary 'to'.

× I don't know, maybe they think it's unnecessary I think and not important. Or maybe they can remember what must to do.

✓ I don't know, maybe they think it's unnecessary and not important. Or maybe they can remember what they must do.

The phrase 'it's unnecessary I think and not important' is awkward; removing 'I think' or repositioning it improves clarity. Also, 'what must to do' lacks the subject pronoun and has an incorrect infinitive form.

× It's for me, I prefer make a list in my phone because it's simple.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's simple.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a phone; 'on my phone' is the correct phrase. Also, 'prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'.

× When I must to do something I just open my pond and I looking at the list.

✓ When I must do something, I just open my phone and look at the list.

The modal verb 'must' should be followed by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Also, 'pond' is a typo for 'phone', and 'I looking' should be 'I look'.

× When I must to do something I just open my pond and I looking at the list.

✓ When I must do something, I just open my phone and look at the list.

The pronoun 'I' should be followed by the base verb 'look' not 'looking' in this context.

× But in the paper when we don't have a pen we can make a list.

✓ But on paper, when we don't have a pen, we can't make a list.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. Also, logically, if we don't have a pen, we cannot make a list, so 'can't' is more appropriate than 'can'.