List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“List city items before the shopping”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go out. It helps me remember the items I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“make studies for my study work”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work. By ranking tasks according to their importance and managing my time effectively, I can reduce anxiety and feel a sense of accomplishment as I complete each task.

제안: 你的回答思路清晰，但句子结构有些重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议使用更多连接词和多样化句式，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because situations often change unexpectedly. As a result, their plans become outdated, which can cause anxiety if they can't complete everything on the list.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“in the digital today the phone can portable”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子结构的完整性和连贯性。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's portable and convenient. I can easily add or delete items whenever I need to.

× List city items before the shopping can remind me to buy the things I really want and avoid wasting money.

✓ Listing items before shopping can remind me to buy the things I really want and avoid wasting money.

这里的“List city items”不符合语法，应该使用动名词形式“Listing”作为主语。并且“city”可能是笔误，应去掉。动名词作为主语时，表示动作的过程。

× Yes, I always make studies for my study work.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my study work.

“studies”用法不当，应该用复数名词“lists”表示“清单”，因为题目是关于制作清单。

× Ranking the task based on their importance, allocate my time effectively, and visualizing my task can also reduce my anxiety.

✓ Ranking the tasks based on their importance, allocating my time effectively, and visualizing my tasks can also reduce my anxiety.

句子中三个并列部分应保持一致的形式，均使用动名词形式。原句中“allocate”是动词原形，需改为“allocating”。

× Ranking the task based on their importance, allocate my time effectively, and visualizing my task can also reduce my anxiety.

✓ Ranking the tasks based on their importance, allocating my time effectively, and visualizing my tasks can also reduce my anxiety.

“task”应为复数“tasks”，因为后面用的是“their”，指代复数。

× For example, when unexpected event happened, their original plans become useless.

✓ For example, when an unexpected event happened, their original plans became useless.

“event”前缺少冠词“an”，且“become”应与过去时态“happened”保持一致，改为“became”。

× Well, actually I prefer to make a list on my phone because in the digital today the phone can portable, so I can add some lists to my phone or to delete them.

✓ Well, actually I prefer to make a list on my phone because in today's digital age the phone is portable, so I can add or delete lists on my phone.

“in the digital today”表达不正确，应为“in today's digital age”；“phone can portable”应为“phone is portable”；“add some lists to my phone or to delete them”表达不顺，改为“add or delete lists on my phone”。