List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意动词单复数一致（如"Make a list"应为"Making a list"），避免重复表达（"really clear"和"realize"意思重复），并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need. Moreover, having a list allows me to shop quickly and avoid buying unnecessary items, which saves me a lot of time.

제안: 回答内容较完整，但句子结构较复杂且有语法错误，如"be clarified"应为"be clear"，"which is the first"表达不够准确。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work. It helps me understand my tasks clearly and prioritize urgent ones, which greatly improves my efficiency.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，如"making this also cost to your life"不通顺，"do things from follow their heart"表达错误。建议多练习表达原因时的句型，注意语法和词汇搭配。

예시: There are a few reasons. First, some people think making lists wastes time. Second, lists require strict planning, but some prefer to be spontaneous and follow their feelings.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如"Write it for me is a refreshing of mine"不通顺，"inform"用词错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意句子结构和词汇选择。

예시: I prefer to write my lists on paper because it feels refreshing and helps me remember tasks better. Using a phone keyboard is less convenient and doesn't help me remember as well.

× Make a list not only help me realize what I need right now, but also help me to find a target immediately, which really reduces lots of my times.

✓ Making a list not only helps me realize what I need right now, but also helps me to find a target immediately, which really reduces a lot of my time.

The subject 'Make a list' should be in gerund form 'Making a list' to act as the subject of the sentence. Also, the verb should agree with the singular subject, so 'help' changes to 'helps'. 'Lots of my times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'a lot of my time' because 'time' is uncountable here.

× Definitely, I'd like to make a list for my work so that I can not only be clarified about what I'm going to do, but also know what is urgent and what is less urgent so that I can plan which is the first that really improve my work efficiency.

✓ Definitely, I'd like to make a list for my work so that I can not only be clear about what I'm going to do, but also know what is urgent and what is less urgent so that I can plan which is first and that really improves my work efficiency.

The phrase 'be clarified' is incorrect here; it should be 'be clear' to express understanding. Also, 'which is the first that really improve' should be 'which is first and that really improves' to maintain subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× First, making this also cost to your life.

✓ First, making this also costs your life.

The verb 'cost' should be in third person singular present tense 'costs' to agree with the singular subject 'making this'. The preposition 'to' is unnecessary here.

× making a list means you that that you should be strict with your plan.

✓ making a list means that you should be strict with your plan.

The phrase 'you that that you' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'that you' for clarity and correctness.

× But some people may just like the possibility and they like to do things from follow their heart.

✓ But some people may just like the possibility and they like to do things following their heart.

The phrase 'from follow their heart' is incorrect. The correct form is 'following their heart' to express doing things according to their feelings.

× Write it for me is a refreshing of mine.

✓ Writing it for me is refreshing for me.

The verb 'Write' should be in gerund form 'Writing' to act as the subject. 'A refreshing of mine' is awkward; 'refreshing for me' is more natural.

× I can know clearly about what I'm going to do, but inform I think using a keyboard is less convenient and it will not strengthen my memory.

✓ I can clearly know what I'm going to do, but in my opinion, I think using a keyboard is less convenient and it will not strengthen my memory.

The word 'inform' is incorrect here; it should be 'in my opinion' to express personal view. Also, 'know clearly about' is better as 'clearly know'.