List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, "it's help me" nên là "it helps me" và tránh lặp từ như "grocery, grocery". Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tăng điểm.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember exactly what I need and prevents me from forgetting important items. For example, I often list groceries and household supplies to stay organized.

제안: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác như "it's helped me" nên là "it helps me", "task" nên số nhiều "tasks", và "most important words" có thể là "most important work" hoặc "tasks". Hãy chú ý dùng thì đúng và từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I always prepare a list before I start working because it helps me prioritize my tasks and focus on the most important ones. By organizing my work this way, I can manage my time effectively and avoid forgetting important duties.

제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ "priority" nên là "priorities", và "organizing the day with Alice" có vẻ không đúng ngữ cảnh, có thể bạn muốn nói "organizing the day with a list". Hãy chú ý chọn từ phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary. They feel confident they can remember their tasks and priorities without writing them down. For example, some prefer to rely on their memory and intuition instead of organizing their day with a list.

제안: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "making less" nên là "making lists", "turn up my phone" nên là "turn off my phone", "paperless mean" nên là "paper list", và "helps me forget better" có thể là "helps me remember better". Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can keep them visible in front of me while working, which helps me stay organized. Also, I usually turn off my phone to avoid distractions, so having a paper list allows me to check my tasks without using my phone. This method helps me remember better and complete my work more efficiently.

× because it's help me remember exactly what I need to buy and avoiding forgetting anything important.

✓ because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and avoid forgetting anything important.

The modal verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'avoiding' should be changed to 'avoid' to maintain parallel structure with 'remember'.

× For example, I often write down grocery, grocery, and household items.

✓ For example, I often write down groceries and household items.

The word 'grocery' should be pluralized to 'groceries' to correctly refer to multiple items. Also, 'grocery' was repeated unnecessarily.

× because it's helped me prioritize my task and focus on the most important words for for example.

✓ because it helps me prioritize my tasks and focus on the most important work, for example.

The phrase 'it's helped' should be 'it helps' to match the present tense context. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context, and 'words' should be 'work' to make sense.

× By organizing my work this way, I manage my time effectively and avoid forgetting important duties.

✓ By organizing my work this way, I manage my time effectively and avoid forgetting important duties.

No correction needed here as the prepositions are used correctly.

× They feel confident that they can remember their tasks and priority in their mind without writing them down.

✓ They feel confident that they can remember their tasks and priorities in their minds without writing them down.

'Priority' should be plural 'priorities' to match 'tasks'. 'Mind' should be plural 'minds' to agree with plural subject 'they'.

× Some people prefer to rely on their memory and intuition rather than organizing the day with Alice.

✓ Some people prefer to rely on their memory and intuition rather than organizing the day with a list.

The word 'Alice' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; it should be 'a list' to make sense in context.

× I prefer making less on paper because I can keep them visible in front of me while at work which helps me stay organized.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because I can keep them visible in front of me while at work, which helps me stay organized.

'Less' should be 'lists' to correctly refer to multiple items. Added a comma before 'which' for clarity.

× Also, I usually turn up my phone to avoid distractions, so having a paperless mean I can still check my tasks without net in the phone.

✓ Also, I usually turn off my phone to avoid distractions, so having a paper list means I can still check my tasks without needing the phone.

'Turn up' should be 'turn off' to correctly express stopping phone use. 'Paperless' should be 'paper list' to make sense. 'Mean' should be 'means' to agree with singular subject. 'Net in the phone' is incorrect; corrected to 'needing the phone'.

× This method helps me forget better and complete my work more efficient.

✓ This method helps me remember better and complete my work more efficiently.

'Forget' should be 'remember' to match intended meaning. 'Efficient' should be the adverb 'efficiently' to modify the verb 'complete'.