List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'things to do to buy' nên sửa thành 'things to buy'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need. I usually write it down on paper or use my smartphone notes, which helps me stay organized and save money.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và chính tả, ví dụ 'Leech' nên là 'list'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn với cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'commuters'. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

예시: Yes, I make a list every day at work because I have many tasks to complete. This helps me prioritize my duties and ensures I don't forget anything, making me more efficient.

제안: Bạn cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, ví dụ 'Leech' thành 'list' và 'waste of times' thành 'a waste of time'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để nối ý, đồng thời giải thích cụ thể hơn.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. They believe they can remember their tasks clearly without writing them down.

제안: Bạn nên dùng từ đúng như 'list' thay vì 'leash' và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'possessing' nên dùng 'own'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng liên từ để nối ý, đồng thời tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I used to make lists on paper, but now that I have a smartphone, I find it more convenient to use my phone because I can carry it everywhere.

× Oh definitely yes because whenever I go shopping I have so many things to do to buy.

✓ Oh definitely yes because whenever I go shopping I have so many things to buy.

The phrase 'things to do to buy' is incorrect because 'to do' is unnecessary here. The correct form is 'things to buy' since 'buy' is the verb that directly relates to 'things'.

× That's why I always write down the paper or notes on my smartphone to know what I should to do and especially it helps me to save money.

✓ That's why I always write down on paper or take notes on my smartphone to know what I should do, and especially it helps me save money.

The phrase 'write down the paper' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'write down on paper'. Also, 'should to do' is incorrect; it should be 'should do'. The sentence is also improved by adding 'take notes' for clarity.

× Yes, I make a Leech for every single day at the commuters.

✓ Yes, I make a list every single day during my commute.

'Leech' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'list'. Also, 'at the commuters' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'during my commute'.

× I have so many events and so I have organized what I should do 1st and UMM.

✓ I have so many events, so I organize what I should do first.

The phrase 'I have organized' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'organize' is better. Also, '1st' should be spelled out as 'first'.

× It's helped me to be more effective in work and I also don't miss any work.

✓ It helps me to be more effective at work and I also don't miss any tasks.

'It's helped' is present perfect, but the context suggests a general truth, so simple present 'helps' is better. Also, 'in work' should be 'at work'.

× Because they feel that making Leech is something waste of times and they can remember clearly and they know what they should do, so they don't make lists.

✓ Because they feel that making lists is a waste of time and they can remember clearly what they should do, so they don't make lists.

'Leech' is incorrect; it should be 'lists'. 'Waste of times' should be 'a waste of time'. The sentence is also improved by removing redundancy.

× I get used to making a leash on the paper, but right now I'm possessing my own smartphone and I get more convenience when I note on your phone and I can take it everywhere I go.

✓ I am used to making lists on paper, but right now I have my own smartphone and I find it more convenient to take notes on my phone, which I can carry everywhere I go.

'Leash' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. 'Possessing' is awkward; 'have' is better. 'Get more convenience' should be 'find it more convenient'. 'Note on your phone' should be 'take notes on my phone'.