List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'don't make a late' nên là 'don't make a list'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items I need. However, if I'm in a hurry, I sometimes skip making a list and just buy what I remember.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, 'make a lift' nên là 'make a list', và câu nên được tổ chức lại để tránh gây nhầm lẫn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết.

예시: Yes, I always make a list of my assignments at school. This helps me remember my homework and complete it even after a long day.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'to making' nên là 'to make'. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng hơn và câu nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel it takes too much time and they believe it's unnecessary.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'my phone is have very off' không đúng ngữ pháp và khó hiểu. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's very convenient. However, if I forget my phone at home, I use paper instead.

× However, if I don't have enough time, I don't make a late then I go to the shopping.

✓ However, if I don't have enough time, I don't make a list then I go shopping.

The word 'late' is incorrect here; it should be 'list'. Also, 'go to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The verb 'make' is correctly used with 'list' as a noun, but the noun was wrong.

× Definitely, I always make a lift for your assignment at school.

✓ Definitely, I always make a list for my assignments at school.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect because the speaker is talking about their own assignments, so 'my' should be used. Also, 'lift' is a typo and should be 'list'.

× Is this the assignment that teacher give by student?

✓ Is this the assignment that the teacher gave to the student?

The sentence structure is incorrect. It needs the definite article 'the' before 'teacher', the past tense 'gave' instead of 'give', and the preposition 'to' before 'student' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× Then I always make it to do is have me remember the homework and done it after a long school.

✓ Then I always make it to help me remember the homework and finish it after a long day at school.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Make it to do' is incorrect; it should be 'make it to help me'. 'Done it' should be 'finish it'. Also, 'after a long school' is incomplete; it should be 'after a long day at school'.

× In my opinion, I think some people don't like making this because they don't have enough time to making a list and sometimes they think it's unnecessary.

✓ In my opinion, I think some people don't like making lists because they don't have enough time to make a list and sometimes they think it's unnecessary.

The phrase 'to making a list' is incorrect; after 'to' we use the base form 'make'. Also, 'making this' is vague; 'making lists' is clearer and more appropriate.

× Absolutely, I prepare to make a list on my phone because my phone is have very off and I think it's very convenient.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me and I think it's very convenient.

'Prepare to make' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer to make'. 'My phone is have very off' is ungrammatical; it should be 'my phone is always with me'. The pronoun usage and verb forms need correction.

× Sometime if I forget home, forget phone at home.

✓ Sometimes if I forget my phone at home,

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'Forget home' is incorrect; it should be 'forget my phone at home'. The sentence needs to be completed for clarity.

× I always use a paper to make a list.

✓ I always use paper to make a list.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is an uncountable noun in this context. We say 'use paper' not 'use a paper'.